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Post by moofoot on Mar 8, 2005 6:04:49 GMT -5
Oooh, yesh, very. ;D And I'd love to see an ending [?] of it - perhaps the way they get together, or maybe the way they act around each other after the letter - something like that. Just a suggestion. The fic is perfect on its own, really.
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Post by moofoot on Mar 10, 2005 9:18:59 GMT -5
Ooooh, yeshhh, you've continued!!! Yay!! Likin' it so far - especially how you've written Keely's feelings and explained them, and how you've described the setting so we can get the sort of scene that's enfolding. Not likin' the part that you've left it as a cliffie [ ] but hey, I'm sure I can live with it. Update soon!!!
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missperfect
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Post by missperfect on Mar 14, 2005 17:05:42 GMT -5
im loving all the updates, keep 'em coming!
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missperfect
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Post by missperfect on Mar 21, 2005 18:09:25 GMT -5
"You Wish" is REALLY good. keep on writing, people!
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Post by moofoot on Mar 22, 2005 6:38:34 GMT -5
heh, two part one shot - that's new. =P but I like it - a lot - anyways, so update! fast! I love the descriptions you've made of their characters so far. ;D
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missperfect
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Post by missperfect on Mar 27, 2005 7:14:29 GMT -5
yay! an update! great job on "Easier Thought Than Done"! i love how its going so far!
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Post by 1080 on Mar 28, 2005 1:27:30 GMT -5
--Fan-Fic #9 "Easier Thought than Done"--
Awsome story! Really can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue with it, I'm really enjoying it. It's really great how you wrote Phil & Keely; they seem to be very in-character. The whole pace of the story flows very well. Can't wait for more!
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Post by ♥~Mel Diffy~♥ on Mar 29, 2005 23:05:49 GMT -5
werewolf1885 is right, 1080, your fanfic rocks. It's so filled w/ emotion & so well-written (grammar & everything). You've definitely got talent.
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Post by wadia47 on Mar 31, 2005 20:53:46 GMT -5
hey! i really like # 13 Times Up. you got to a really good start! it was really clever to end the chapter like that. i really like it and please continue! update soon!! ;D
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yumi50
Berwick's Angel
"I need to figure out my life...I need to make plans...I need to DANCE!"~Phil~
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Post by yumi50 on Apr 3, 2005 7:58:07 GMT -5
REALLY GOOD! KEEP POSTING!
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missperfect
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Post by missperfect on Apr 6, 2005 18:18:37 GMT -5
great job with "time's up"! the twist @ the end of the most recent chappie definitely surprised me. update soon! i wanna know what's gonna happen!
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2121Phil
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Post by 2121Phil on Apr 7, 2005 15:15:48 GMT -5
I just read the updates on 'Time's Up' and 'The Call'! Keep writing, they're really good!
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missperfect
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Post by missperfect on Apr 7, 2005 18:08:06 GMT -5
the update on 'the call' is really good! keep on writing peeps!
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Aly
Stranded Time Traveler
Dont they know that im a hiphop queen, a rock & roll dream. Im the star of the scene..Then i woke up
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Post by Aly on Apr 20, 2005 17:42:45 GMT -5
all the fanfics are REALLY good!! good job ppls! ;D
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Post by Drama Queen Jessi 5 on May 17, 2005 17:42:33 GMT -5
so i just wanted to ask two questions 1. does anybody read the fan fics anymore (especially mine) 2. what do u think of the changes in mine if u read it.
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