Fanfic #1: "Back To the Past"

[boricua4ever]

Ok so I finally got inspired to make a fanfic, I waited for so long for some idea to come and here it is, i'm so excited . Tell me if you like it.
Back To the Past
- Is everybody ready?- said Lloyd pushing all the buttoms of the time machine excited.
-Yes, I think so- Babara looked at her kids, especially to Phil who was, to her surprise, smiling.- I've got to say I'm going to miss this little town- She said whith a smile
-Me too, after all, we've been here for two years.
-I must admit- said Pim raising her voice- I am going to miss this century.
-You are?- said everyone surprised
-Amm Pim... are you feeling Ok? Are you sure you don't have a fever or something?-said Phil touching her forehead. She instantly push him away.
- Yes, I'm Ok. My "ruler of the world" plan was a lot easier here with this slow, retarded minds than in 2121.
Phil looked away and then thought about Keely of how much he liked her, pf how much he was going to miss her smile, her eyes. Everyone was thinking about the things they were going to miss about 2006. Their thoughts got interrupted by Pim.
-I hate to break the moment but you do remember that we have to get Curtis back to stone age, right?
-Ohh Curtis! yeah, yeah, right- said Lloyd pretending he didn't forgot Curtis as he started to set the time machine to the stone age. The engine started making its loud noise and then came the beaming orange licht and then everyone in Pickford felt something similar to an earthquake. Keely, who was near, felt it and sighted:
-Goodbye Phil, Good Bye forever.-a tear fell down from her eyes.
The diffys went to the stone age and said their goodbyes to Curtis then left to go home, finally. But then something happened. The time machine started to slow down...2005....2006...2007...2008...it stoped.
"welcome to the year 2008"- a robotic voice said.
-Dad, dad what's wrong?- said pim worried.
-Lloyd?- Barbara looked at her husband.
-I.... I don't know. I triple checked before we left and everything was in place. Let me turn it on again.
-Oh pleasde work, PLEASE!!!!-begged pim
Phil was very quiet. He was supposed to be happyt that they were returning to their home burt he wanted to stay in 2006, with keely, his best friend, the person who knew him better that any of his future friends.
-It doesn't work!
-NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!- screamed PIm and everyone had to cover their ears- Not again! you stupid time machine and your big lausy tiem engine that can't do anything else but stuck us in time!- Pim was now standing kicking the walls of the time machine.
-Pim stop that!- Barbara grabed her by her arms and pulled her away- Guess we're stuck again.
-But this time two years later... In 2008.
Phil couldn't hide a big smile on his lips, Pim covered her facedesesperated, barbara looked at Lloyd worried and Lloyd scratched his head wondering what had happened....

[boricua4ever]

-I have to find keely!-Phil walked ahead of everyone.
-This place hasn't changed a lot.- Barbara was looking at eveerythign around her.
-That's it! Maybe it was the fuel... maybe, maybe we were running out of fuel and I din't noticed!- Lloyid turned around and went towards the time machine.
-Ok honey, we are going to look around.
Phil got to the school. Since it wasn't lunch time yet Phil standed in front of Keely's locker and waited there. She was now in twelve grade and he wondered if she had changesa lot in those two years, if she remembered their kiss, if she still liked him.
The bell rang and everyone got out of their classrooms. Phil was getting nervious and then he saw her. He'd recognize her anywhere. She was taling with Via, Owen and a boy he didn't recognized. She kept walking towards her locker, she still didn't saw him. Phil stared at her. She had changed a little, her hair was now shorter but to him she looked perfect.
-Phi- Phil?- She said, no0t believing what her eyes were seeing- Is that you?
-Yeap, the one and only- he said very excited but keely on the other hand had an expresion of amusement, confusion or sadness at the same time. Wasn't she happy to see me? he wondered.
-Keel, its so good to see you!- he said. SHe finally smiled and ran towards him. They hugged eachother really hard and stayed like that for a while. Then they looked into eachother's eyes. Phil was getting closer, he was about to kiss her but she looked away. Phil stared at her confused by what she did.
-Am... Owen, Via you remember Phil.
_Of course! Man ,how are you doing?-Owen and Phil did a weird handshake.
-Hey Phil- said Via and gave him a short hug.
-amm...Michael I want you to meet Phil, Phil, Michael. Michael, Phil.
-Hi nice to meet you- Said Phil.
-Nice to meet you too.
-So... are you staying or you just came on vacation- asked Keely insecure.
-Well we...am yeah I think we are going to stay here for a while.
-Oh nice- Keely wasn't as happy as Phil expect her to be. Owen, Via and Michael left to lunch.
- Do you wanrt me to get you something, Keely?- asked Michael.
-No, I'll be there in a minute.
As he went awauy Phil followed him with his eyes and the looked at keely excited.
-So, for how long are you staying?
-We're preety much stuck here, again.
-No way!
-Yes way. When we left Curtis on then stone age we were going to 2121 but then the time machine started to slow down and it stoped here. So I'm staying!!- He said holding her hands. She faked a smile and pu her hands away form Phil's
-That's great.
-Ok, keel, What's wrong? Don't you remember what we hasd? DOn't you remember the day I left?...The Kiss?
-Yeah, I remember... It was two years ago.
-And now we can finally be together. (The pheely fans will want to kill me but don't, please)
-No, didn't you get it. It was two years ago. I've changed...
-What?- he said, his voice shivering.
-Phil... I'm sorry, I am but I thought you were never coming back and...
-You're dating someone else- he said sad but furious at the same time.- Who?
-Phil I really like you but I mean, you never came back and I thought we could never be
-What?! I can't believe you!
-I knew you wouldn't understand.
-What do you mean by that?
-Phil, you never actually spend two years waiting, surrounded by people. You just sat on your time machine and time traveled and it happened that it stoped here. Phil you don't know what it was like.
-SO who is it?
-Michael. He got to school after you left, when we became sophomores...
-I'm going home, I don't suppose to be here anyways.
-Phil- he turned around and looked at her with a sad face.- I'm sorry, I feel so bad.
-Yeah, well I feel worse- he turned around again and left. While he was waling Pim ran in front of him.
-Help! Somebody get me out of here!- she shouted and started to run again when she saw Debbie Berwick and Danny running her way.
-Ohh Pim, Pim. Come on, don't run away from us. I'm your best friend- said Debbie while she ran.
-Yeah and I'm...what? I'm her best friend-said Danny.
-No I am, silly
-No, I 'm her bestfriend and lover.
-Well I am sorry but I'm her bestfriend
-No I am
-I am
-Wait, Don't let her get away!

So that's what i have so far. I'll continue when I get an idea of how to keep the story going 'cause I had to stop 'cause my brain freezed and I am stuck. Don't know what to write next but I promise I'll write something soo. and Pheely fans Keely and Phil are getting back together, that I'm sure of because I am becoming a Pheely fan too, Its just I thought the story would be more interesting this way.