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Post by prince on Dec 14, 2005 17:43:03 GMT -5
OK guys, this is my first fanfic ever, so wish me luck! ------------------------------------------------------------------ Time Freeze: Chapter 1: Phil was extremely happy. First of all he and Keely were going to the park together today, that was phenominal in itself. Keely was the cute, ecstatic blonde who also happened to be his best friend, she was sometimes emotional but always fun to be around. Although they had a couple of rough times they were all in the past, they had be forgiven and forgotten on the spot. The second thing Phil was happy about was he had just got his results from the maths test back and he aced the class! And the next reason Phil was happy was because Phil was a generally happy person. Anyway, today could not get any better. Phil often though of his life at the peak of its mountian looking over everything it had been through and sighing. "Phil?" Phil snapped back into reality, "Uh... yeh?" "You've been staring at your watch for literally 10 minutes now, whats the time!" Keely said with a hint of annoyance, thats what Phil loved about Keely, always down to earth but sincere. "Oh," Phil said and looked at Keely, "My bad." He glanced at his watch, "Quarter past!" He announced after a second of fiddling with roman numerals in his head. Keely looked at him with an expectant face, "Oh, quarter past six" His said making a gesture to see if he said the right thing. "Ok, lets head off then" She said and stood up, "Uh... whatever, whatever you say" He said and followed her like a lost puppy. It usually took 10 minutes tops to reach the park but he and Keely having an intersting chat about whether Piglet looked more like a rat or a pig, "I tell you Keel, he looks nothing like a pig! If his name wasn't Piglet know noone would think so!" Phil said trying to prove his point "Aw! But he's all pink and cuddly!" Keely said back "Look at this pig!" Phil said whipping out his wizard and showing her a hologram, "Does that look cuddly to you?" "Um... Phil?" Keely said with a low tone "What Keels?" Phil shot back "We're in a public place," She said and Phil looked around, hopefully noone had noticed the wizard. Because Phil actually came from the year 2121 he had to hide his real identity, only Keely knew his secrete and she was very cautious not to tell anyone. "Right," Phil said carfully concealing it in his bag, "Lets go to a less public place to settle this arguement," "Ok!" Keely said happily, Phil would never admit it but he liked being alone with her. ----------------------------------------------------------------- Ok thats chapter one, don't worry, its actually gonna start making sense soon. Please review it although its too early to know whats actually happening!
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Post by prince on Dec 14, 2005 18:07:08 GMT -5
Ok, this is number 2! Hope you like it! And/or ppl read it! ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Chapter 2:
The afternoon was pretty much spent bringing up new points for the piglet case. Although they both knew Piglet is a pig, Phil still thought he looked more like a rat. Phil kept on using the Wizard to prove him right but Keely kept making up some excuse, Phil had to admit it was a sad topic to be talking about.
"Alright, here's the deal," Phil said bringing up a hologram of both Piglet and a real pig. "Although they don't look alike, they have the same traits" "Yes" Keely said, "Very well said" "Well i'd say that about wraps up this case" Phil said smiling at Keely with a zing that she always smiled back at. It worked, she did. Suddenly someone came out of the bushes, he was staring at the hologram in between them. "Uh oh" Phil said "What is that?" The person asked, "Um... uh... well" Phil was usually good at thinking on his feet, but now his brain had turned to mush. Another person stepped out, with the same expression on his face. "How many of you are there?" Keely asked with a hesitant smile, at her word about 3 dozen or so people steped into the clearing, along with the news repoter Brian O'Lion. He was already speaking into the camera, Think quick phil He whipped out his wizard and set it to full blast, and hit the button, in a single move every single one of the onlookers were frozen. "Phil! Why did you do that?" Keely asked "Aw, c'mon Keel!" Phil whined, "It was on the spot! I can't help being a tad over dramatic!" "Alright, but we're going to have to cover this up you know?" She said, Phil smiled at the word 'we're', he could always count on Keely. "Alright, we tell them that they were abducted by aliens!" Keely said, "C'mon Keel, we can't fit all of them in our house like last time!" Phil was reffering to the last time someone almost found out about his secrete, in which he froze him and brought him home and convinced him he was abducted by an alien. "And besides, its unoriginal" "Ok, well why don't we..." She was cut short, "Why don't we what Keel?" Phil asked as she stared at the sky, "Tell me, is that supposed to happen?" Keely asked, "What?" Phil started but didn't have time to finish, a bird plummeted from the sky and collided with the ground with a sickening thud. Phil reeled abit and looked at Keely with a strange look, "Well birds die all the time from old age Keel, even when they're flying" "No, look" She said and motioned up, Phil looked up and saw hundreds of birds littering the sky, all falling. "What the...?" Phil lost grip of the Wizard and it fell to the ground, he didn't even notice. This new dilema was much more strange, "What do you think happened?" Keely said with worry in her voice, Phil knew how much she cared about animals and that sort of stuff. Typical girly girl. "I don't know Keels," Phil said, eyes fixated on the sky. This day was getting wierder and weirder...
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Post by prince on Dec 14, 2005 18:33:12 GMT -5
Anyways chapter 3! Wo0t! go me! Anyways enjoy, ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3:
Phil and Keely were wondering around the icecream shop, Phil couldn't understand how the shopkeeper wasn't coming out side to check it out. He voiced his thoughts, "Maybe he is on his lunch break," Keely replied with a shrug, "Then how come noone in the entire town is out here looking?" Phil asked, Keely looked at Phil for a second, "Maybe their all out for a lunch break?" She suggested. Phil shook his head and kept walking, "You want an icecream?" Phil asked, "Only if you shout," Keely replied with an irresistalbe look that Phil just couldn't say not to. "Um," He started as he walked up to the counter, "Can i have 2 double scoop, double choc chip heaven with sprinkles?" He asked the man at the counter, he just stared back. "Uh, thats 2 double scoop, double choc chip heaven with sprinkles" Phil said and fished for his wallet, No reply. "Ok, playing the not talking, staring game are we?" Phil said, "Well two can play at that can play at that game!" Phil put on the dirtiest look he could and started to stare his opponent down, sweat started to pour down his face as he held his gaze, 5 minutes went by and Keely just sat down and started playing with her shoelaces.
After 10 minutes Phil gave up, "You're good at your game i admit!" Phil said, "But can you top this?" Phil put on an even dirtier look then the previous and stared at the ice cream man, all he got back was a stare. "Hey Keels," Phil said, "I think somethings wrong," "Well, obviously he's been frozen by your Wizard!" Keely said "I wonder what..." Phil sat down next to her, "Its very bad, i can tell, if he keeps up his game we'll never get an ice cream!" He kept thinking, unbeknownst to his best friends enlightenment. "I'm sorry, what did you say?" He asked after 5 minutes of intense thinking, "I think you froze all of Pickford!" Keely said with hardly enough enthusiasm compared to the gravity of the situation. "Oh," Phil said simply, "Thats much worse" "Yes, now c'mon we have to go mess with that angry mobs mind and unfreeze it all again," Keely said "Ok," He looked into his pack, the Wizard was gone. "The wizard was gone" He said, "I mean it is gone" "What!? Where?" Keely asked, "Oh yes, i dropped it at the park," Phil said and stood up, "Cmon lets go get it"
It took Phil and Keely 2 minutes to reach the park, Phil was thinking the entire way. Well so much for the mountain, if his life was still a mountain, he had just fallen off it.
"Alright," Keely said, "There it is, now lets go get it before anything else could possibly go..."
At this exact moment, something very bad happened. And if Phil's life was for some reason still a mountian, he would have fallen off it, blown it up and buried it somewhere on a different planet -----------------------------------------------------------------------
Hahaha im slack, o well the next chapter will be up soon
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Post by prince on Dec 14, 2005 19:04:38 GMT -5
Alright, this is what could possibaly go wrong... ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 4:
"... Wrong" Keely finished, and at her word a plane fell out of the sky, perfectly vertical and landed right top of the Wizard. "Scraps" Keely said as the plane twisted into a shape never meant for planes to fly in. The plane, if flying horizontal or diagonal would have taken out both of them, lucky it was a private jet... "Run Keely!" Phil said and grabbed her arm, "What? Why?" She asked "When destroyed, the Wizard it programed to explode!" Phil said and took off, "What!? Why?" Keely had been saying that alot lately. "Anti theft! If it ever gets destroyed it assumes someone is trying to steal it! And detonates!" Phil shouted over the rush of wind, "What thats the stupidist thing i have ever heard! Why would they do that?" Keely shouted back "It was a glitch!" Phil said, "When it broke, it was supposed to say 'thank you for using, Wizard' but instead it blew up!" "What!? Why?" There was her famous line again, "Complicated, just run!"
The two ran on and reached the Diffy's house, for some reason it seemed only animals and people were freezing, not inatimate objects. "Hay mum! Hay dad!" Phil said running in, forgetting they were frozen. The ground shook, but only with little force as they were too far away to be effected at all by the explosion. "So whats the plan," Keely said "Simple, we use dads Wizard to zap it back to normal!" Phil said and scoured the house for it, "Any clues on where it is?" Keely asked "Not one" Phil replied, this really crashed his plans with Keely, and his maths test sorta just faded into his memory.
There was a knock at the door, "Coming!" Keely said and started towards the door, "Who could that be?" Phil asked, "I thought we froze everyone!" He kept looking through his fathers room and stumbled upon the skyack ball, "I might need this," He noted to himself "Keely i found something!" He yelled downstairs, "Uh, thats good!" Came her voice, "Listen can you come back down for a sec? Puleeeeeze?" Phil looked up from what he was doing, there was no resisting the way she said 'puleeeeze.' "Alright, but i have to go check on the Wiz..." Phil reached the bottom of the staircase and found Keely gagged and tied, surround by a group of future policemen with a voice converter 3000... ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Ooo the plot thickens!!!! Sorry, if anyone wants some Pheely dont hesitate to ask! Just Pm me or post it in the reviews!
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Post by prince on Dec 14, 2005 21:48:02 GMT -5
Alrighty, this is the cool bit... ----------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 5:
Phil didn't even need an explanation, the time police had picked up that there had been a disturbance in time. Immediately investigated and found out that someone had stopped time, and since noone invented a wizard untill shortly after this period they came to investigate. Phil took action immediately,
"Mr Phil Diffy you are under arrest for the freezing of the whole of ancient earth and being an illegal time immigrant" The cop said "Uh... what can i say?" Phil said with an astonished look, "Except catch!" Phil threw the Skyak ball and pulled Keely towards him, she was still gagged and tied but Phil could improvise. "Cover!" Yelled the head of the time police and before any of them could move the ball expanded into a full sized, leather interior skyak. "Make that the freezing of the whole of ancient earth, being an illegal time immigrant and possesion of futuristic gadgets in the past buddy!" Said the leader as struggled under the weight of the skyak. "Quick Keely, jump!" Phil said, "Mmmhmmm!?!" Keely said "Oh, right" Phil said, Keely was still tied up. Phil picked her up and jumped, from the foot of the staircase onto the Skyak. He felt a familiar crunch as he landed wrong, a sick feeling flew into his mouth as he gasped for air. And to top it off, Keely was hammering into his back with her head. He looked around, the police were up again, "Ok! ok!" Phil said and revved the engine, he took off and Keely fell off the back. Phil looked back and saw her land back first, "Crackers" He mummbled and turned his head back. CRASH! Straight into the wall, good driving Diffy. Phil jumped off and headed for Keely, she was being carried away by to of the significantly bigger, probably stupider ones. "Keely!" He yelled out, "No!" "Mmmmh!" Keely yelled back, "Mm!" Phil didn't know what she said but he guessed it was something along the lines of... "Phil! No!" She actually said, "Look out for that wall!!" But Phil didn't need to know anymore. "Ah this isn't good" Phil said as Keely was forced out the back door, there was no way he could get to her. Because the bruisers were blocking his way. He did the only thing he could, retreated to his Skyak and crashed through the window. "I promise i'll save you Keel," He told himself, "I will not let a single one of the touch you" Phil felt tears starting to well in his eyes, then he stopped, "Ok fine, they've already touched you, but i promise they will not harm you!" Once again his tears started to find their way to his eyes but he stopped, "No, Keely wouldn't want me to cry." He told himself, "I need to be strong if i wanna rescue my damsel in distress"
Keely looked up at the steadly blackeing sky from the Skyack she was prisoner to, the stars were starting to come out. She started to sob, Phil would be there! Phil was always there! But deep down she knew Phil was just as scared and alone without her as she was without him.
Would anyone save her from this nightmare? -----------------------------------------------------------------------
There, abit of Pheely and abit of action. Oooo what will happen next? (Actually to let you in on a secret i dont even know)
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Post by prince on Dec 14, 2005 22:24:40 GMT -5
Ok that wuz a cliffhanger, i wonder if anyone is actually reading these... plz review or sumthing if its good, or bad or if u wanna giv a suggestion! -----------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 6:
Phil Diffy was propped up against a wall feeling very sorry for himself. This day had started of so perfectly! But since then he had frozen the entire planet, broken his wizard and lost his only best friend, or even potencially the one he cared about more then anything else. He could remember the day they met, her smile, him helping her with maths, dancing with a big, fat German guy. Since then he and Keely had become so much closer, they had experienced the world with each other. For the time that they had been together, Keely had been Phil's world, whenever he fell behind Keely would always pick him up. Whenever a problem cropped up, they would walk through it step by step. Now Phil had lost her, he didn't know if he would ever see her again or what the time police were going to do with her but Phil had to stop them, it was his duty. She was his everything, he would get her back no matter what it would take.
Phil took to the sky again, it would not be hard to find the Time Police again because they would be after him. But it would be a different matter finding Keely, she would probably be locked up guarded by a million guards. Just like that "Phil Diffy, we have you surrounded" Came a voice, "Do not run or we will shoot" Phil thought about taking to violence but he didn't want to sink that low, he was pondering his next move when suddenly, "Phil!" It was Keely! "Keely?" Phil yelled above the rush of the wind, "Is that you?" He caught a glimpse of her on one of the policemens Skyak, she was untied and ungagged but she was chained to the Skyak. "Shut her up!" Yelled one of the policemen and the driver of her Skyak sent a blow across he head, she went down. Phil felt his neck grow hot, they had just knocked her out! "Alright thats it!" Phil yelled, "You leave her alone or i'll...!" He had to think about that one for awhile, "I'll leave you alone!" Phil noticed the stupidity in this sentence when the policemen started laughing at him. His mind was racing for something smart to say but unfortunately the electric sparks in that part of his brain had decided to take a lunch break after a clog in the line. But fortunately the part of his brain that thought up ingenious plans was in.
Phil turned his Skyak around and raced towards the police, there was noway he could unattach Keely from the chain that was around her wrist, or the Skyak for that matter but he could try and get onto her Skyak. He aimed for Keely's Skyak and got ready to jump, this would be the dumbest, most original, most dangerous thing Phil had ever done. Except maybe freeze everyone in the first place. He jumped off his Skyak and landed on the dashboard of Keely's. Immdiatelly Phil regretted it and scolded the part of his brain that thought up ingenious plans firmly claiming that it wasn't ingenious, and it certainly wasn't a plan. Reaching over the glass pain he activated the drivers parachute and watched it unfold and yank the bearer right of the Skyak. Phil watched with amazement as his plan actually worked. Immediately he congradulated his brain and apoligised for the misunderstanding.
He climbed around and took the controls of the Skyak, he felt Keely stir and jump with suprise. "Phil? What are you doing here?" She said, sleepily and slow. "Rescuing you Keely," He said and smiled as she gave a huge hug from behind to him. "I can't believe you came back for me!" Keely said excited, "Anything for you," Phil whispered under his voice, and a little louder, "We still have to get away though!" ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Awww! he rescues her!!!! lol i hope u like it, probably could hav more Pheely but i don't want it to end up them going out... anyway reviews plz!
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Post by prince on Dec 15, 2005 6:10:17 GMT -5
Ok, yer sure he gets the girl but they still have to save the world you know! (or is Pheely the only reason ppl read these?) Ok, well im going to try and make this full of Pheely, Funnies and Fighting. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 7:
The wind was a blessing, the night had turned black giving Phil and Keely the perfect cover. Also it gave Phil and Keely the ability to talk because the wind picked up their voices and sent them away from the cops. "Keely, im really sorry i let those guys take you" Phil said stumbling for words, "It was just, the guards, the ropes, the wall, the whole world being frozen..." "Phil," Keely said and touched his shoulder softly, gooseumps rode up his neck. "You are simple amazing" He felt her clench tighter around his waist, Phil could feel a lump in his throat "Keel, i've really wanted to tell you this for so long. Ever since we met its been on my mind" He said, he couldn't beleive this was finally happening, "What Phil?" Keely asked hugging him tight "Well, i think i lo-" Boom! A giant explosion rocked them from behind and sent the Skyak spinning out of control, Phil clenched the handle bars even tighter and questioned fate why everyone else seemed to have bad timing. "Phil Diffy! You are under arrest for..." "Yeah alright i know already" Phil mumbled trying to regain control of the Skyak. "and possetion of futuristic gadgets in the past" The head time policeman finished, "And for being an overall pest." Keely was holding on for dear life as another explosion rocked the sky. This time Phil almost flew over the handle bars, he knew they would'nt be able to last another blast. He asked the part of his brain that thinks of ingenious plans if it had any ideas but it too was on a lunch break.
When Phil finally evened out the Skyak an explosion collided with the bottom of it, Phil and Keely were sent sprawling off the broken Skyak. This was the end, they were both going to die falling because they were blown up by time police who had come from the future because Phil had frozen the entire planet when some people saw his Hologram of Piglet. He saw Keely falling and screaming at the top of her lungs, it took a few seconds to understand what she was saying. He listened harder over the rushing wind, At first he thought she was saying, "Lookout for the ground!" but he quickly erased that one from his memory. Suddenly it hit him just like the ground was about to do, but possibaly harder, "Phil! I love you!" He couldn't believe it, Keely loved him! He 'fell' over to Keely and grabbed a hold of her tight, "And i love you to Keel!" He said and started laughing, she did too. He could not believe it, at a time like this they were laughing, "Well i don't know if its really 'love' i would call it more like really really like" Phil said, "Love is a very strong word, really really strong" "I know what you mean Philly Willy" Keely said and closed her eyes, embracing that her last moments on earth were going to be with the man she really really liked. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The End
Lol just joking! You know its not going to end like that! Thats a horrible ending! But still, you hav to find out!
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Post by prince on Dec 16, 2005 0:29:50 GMT -5
Ok, if anyone is reading this you can let go of your breath now, this is the next installment... please review! i hav no reviews! ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 7, (or is it 8?):
Falling, It didn't matter to Phil that he was going to die any more, he had Keely in his arms a thousand feet about sea level with nothing carrying him except sir Issac Newton. The part of his brain that thought of ingenious plans was back, but could think of nothing, the part of his brain that thought of smart things to say was still on holidays and probably no use to him, and the part of Phil's brain that controlled his emotions was going haywire around its office. "Phil?" Came Keely's voice "Yes Keely?" Phil replied, "Promise you'll never let me go?" Keely said and looked into his eyes in the light of the moon, "Of course i wi-" Phil and Keely collided with something resembling a bed sheet. Phil held tight trying to figure out what was going on, they were still falling, only now with a bed sheet wrapped around them... wait a minute... this was a "Parachute!" Phil exclamied, "This is that guy whose parachute i pulled's parachute!" "Brilliant!" Keely said, "But what on earth is it doing here?" "I dont... know, maybe it took him a long time to fall" Phil said, his plan thinking brain was on the job immeditely. Phil grabbed two corners of the parachute and instructed Keely to do the same, and sure enough the wind picked up in their sails, about 4 seconds before they collided with the ground.
Black, everything was black. And Phil could not remember a thing, who was he? What was he doing here? Suddenly it all came rushing back, the Skyak explosion and falling, but he couldn't remember how long he fell or if he was dead. Then he remembered, "Keely!" He yelled out, "Yes?" Came a faint, tired voice "Are you dead too?" Phil yelled out quite stupidly "Um... i dont think so," Keely replied, "Listen, do you have any idea how we got down here? I just remember being on the back of your Skyak after you rescued me and then its all blank!" "Actually, you're not going to believe this" Phil said still lying face down calling out to anyone who could here him, "But i can't remember a thing either!" He suddenly realised that i would make alot more sense, and alot quieter if he opened his eyes, stood up and walked over to Keely. He did. After a few minutes chat they both came to the conclusion that they were shot down, picked up by a stray, flying bed and left here with a sheet to lie on. But it erased thier memories so noone would know of its exsistance. "Very kind of it" Phil added with a smile, "We could have been killed" "Yes," Keely agreed, "Kindest stray, flying bed i have ever met" "So what do we do now?" Keely asked, the last day had been hectic and it was lucky they got sleep when they did, for now it was morning. "I think we should go find the wizard, erase this from the time cops memories and unfreeze the entire world and then maybe i'll consider buying you that icecream" Phil smiled "Sound like a perfect plan" Keely smiled back, "There is no way it could ever fail!" ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Ok they're alive yay, but i still have no idea how they're gonna save the world l alone wipe all those guys minds either. Reviews please!
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