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Post by potffangirl1129 on Aug 10, 2005 0:16:18 GMT -5
Hello everyone. On fanfiction.net I am Animegirl1129, some of you may have already read my fics, but I just found this site.... I have two main POTF stories on there.... one...Never Say Goodbye, which is complete and has a sequel on the way... www.fanfiction.net/s/2323166/1/and When Somebody Loves You.... www.fanfiction.net/s/2520463/1/I hope u read my stories and I hope u enjoy them.... ;D
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:00:29 GMT -5
Someone asked me to post this in the thread... I'm gonna Post it by Chapter... Never Say Goodbye is first.
Chapter 1: The news
Phil Diffy sat on the concrete steps in front of his house. He was completely devastated. His father had just told him the three worst words of his life: 'We're going home'. Though they had lived in the 21st century for a year now, the time machine was always somewhere in the back of his mind. When he first arrived in this time, he couldn't wait to hear those words. Then he had met her. KeelyTeslow.
He saw Keely walking up the street and quickly caught up with her. Without a word he hugged her. "Phil...? What's wrong?" she asked, rather confused. "I need to talk to you." he said.
Soon, they were sitting against the fence at the tennis courts. Keely was sitting between his legs leaning her head against his chest. "Keely...my dad fixed the time machine." he didn't have to say anything else, she knew what was coming. "You're going home?"she asked, he nodded. "Next week. I wish I didn't have to go, but my dad said that this isn't where we belong." Phil explained.
"Of course you belong here. When I'm with you, everything feels right." Keely admitted. "My parents said that i have to give them one good reson to stay. I've been thinking, and I've finally come up with an answer." Phil said. "Really, what is it?" she asked, curiously. "When I first came here the twenty second century was my home, but now, after this past year, i don't think I could go back and just forget about everything, about you." he explained. "You kept our secret, you could have turned us in to the F.B.I. or something" she cut him off. "You know I'd never do that to you, Phil. You're my best friend. And I have another reason you shouldn't leave..." Keely started. "Really, what's that?"he asked.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:01:16 GMT -5
This is Ch2 of NSG
Chapter 2: Promises
"...I have another reason you shouldn't leave." Keely started. "Really, what's that?"he asked. "Phil...I...I love you." she whispered into his ear, so quietly, he almost missed it. She moved to get up, rather emabarassed. "I understand if you don't feel the same, but I couldn't let you leave without telling..." he cut her off by pulling her back. He leaned forward and said the words they both needed to hear-"I love you, too. I just didn't think you would like me back." he said and did the only thing he could think of. He kissed her on the lips. As the kiss ended, Keely got lost in Phil's brown eyes, and she saw the sincere love he had for her.
"Maybe the twenty second century is where Pim, my mom, and my dad belong, but not me, I belong here, with you, Keel. I'm not going to go back with them. I'll find a way." he declared, still holding her in his arms.
"I'm really glad, I don't think I could live without you. Just promise me two things." she asked. "I'd do anything for you, what are they?" he said. "One: You'll always love me. Two: No matter what happens, promise me that we will never say goodbye" Keely stated, never taking her eyes off of him. he knew he would always love her, no matter what, and he never planned to leave her alone, so he nodded. "I promise I'll never stop loving you, no matter where I am, anytime, anyplace, and I promise to never ever say the 'g'-word" Phil swore, a smile spreading across his face. They pinky swore eachother and that promise would stay in their hearts forever.
The chapters do get longer....
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:02:32 GMT -5
CH 3 of NSG
Keely and Phil sat in the tennis courts for over an hour before they realized that a good two inches of snow had piled up around them. "Hey, Keel, it's getting late, we should probably get back" Phil said, sadly, regretting that he had to ruin the moment. "Yeah, you're right. Let's go" she agreed, standing up and taking his hand in her own.
During the ten minute walk from the tennis courts to the street they lived on, another good inch of snow and ice had formed, and they could barely make it down the sidewalks. "Hey, do you want to crash at my house, I mean, it's hard enough walking now, and the wind's picking up." Phil suggested. "Ugh...that's probably a good idea." she said, as they turned down his driveway.
"Hey, Phil, can we talk?" his father asked, seeing his son come in. "No dad, I'm not talking to you. I'm not taking to mom, and I'm not talking to Pim, so don't try it. i just want to be left alone, okay?" he said, more loudly than necessary. "Fine, but in one week, we are leaving. So, you might want to start packing" the older man retorted. "Come on Keel, let's go up to my room." Phil said, changing the subject. She nodded and followed him upstairs.
"I probably shouldn't have said all that. Now there's no hope they'll let me stay here. I'm such a complete idiot!"he yelled at himself, pacing back and forth. "Phil...no you're not. I would have yelled, too and probably a lot worse than you, because, we just found out that what we could have together might get ripped right out from underneath of us. I want to yell because they are going to take you away from me. So can you just do me one thing?" she asked. He nodded. "Can you please just hold me. I know it might sound strange, but when I'm in your arms, everything feels right." before she even finished her sentence, Phil was holding her, and he never wanted to let her go.
By the time morning came, a lot more had happened than just holding. They had gotten lost in the moment, and did something they would never, ever regret. (if you need a mental picture of what I'm trying to say here- go listen to Keith Anderson's Pickin' Wildflowers, trust me you'll get the hint .)
Keely woke up with Phil's arms protectively wrapped around her. She fely his even breathing, telling her that he was still asleep. She managed to roll over so she was facing his chest, and began running her fingers over his muscles. Soon after that Phil woke up. "What are you doing, Keel?" he asked, rather amused by her actions. "Nothing, why didn't you tell me you had a six-pack?" she teased. "Did you need to know I had a six-pack?" Phil answered. "Questions don't answer questions" Keely responded. "I love you"he said, holding her close to him again. "I love you, too, Philly Willy" she said, a wicked grin on her face. "I thought we agreed that was off the table?" he whined.
Then a knock on the door disturbed them. "Hey sleepyheads, time to get up!" Pim yelled. "Alright runt, we're coming." Phil yelled, pulling himself out of bed.
the lyrics for that song are here.
Keith Anderson- Pickin' Wildflowers-
Hey baby whatcha doin' this evening?
Can you meet me down at the railroad tracks?
I got Tom Petty playin' in my Silverado,
And I iced down a six-pack.
Hey Daisy don't you worry 'bout your mama,
Like 007 we can keep it covert.
Undercover on the ground by the water
Gonna get a little peace... on earth.
Baby whatcha say we go pickin' wildflowers?
Got a spot way back in the woods.
Sneak away for a couple of hours,
You and me baby, pickin' wildflowers.
Hey baby, Mother Nature is waitin
And love's bloomin' like a cherry tree.
Let's buzz around, maybe do some pollenating,
Dive on in like honey bees.
Baby whatcha say we go pickin' wildflowers?
Got a spot way back in the woods.
Sneak away for a couple of hours,
You and me baby, pickin' wildflowers.
Take a trail ride if you know what I mean
Hey baby won't you come with me?
Baby whatcha say we go pickin' wildflowers?
Got a spot way back in the woods.
Sneak away for a couple of hours,
You and me baby, pickin' wildflowers.
Baby whatcha say we go pickin' wildflowers?
Got a spot way back in the woods.
Sneak away for a couple of hours,
You and me baby, pickin' wildflowers.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:03:42 GMT -5
CH 4 of NSG
Chapter 4: Snow Day
Then a knock on the door disturbed them. "Hey sleepyheads, time to get up!" Pim yelled. "Alright runt, we're coming." Phil yelled, pulling himself out of bed.
Ten minutes later they were both downstairs having pancakes."Well, we're off to school. Bye" Phil said. "Ugh...Phil, we don't have school today, there's more than two feet of snow out there." Pim informed him, as if he should already know. "Okay. So then, snowball fight?" he challenged. Pim got that evil look in her eyes as they raced outside. Phil grinned maniacly, pulling out the replicator and copied himself. They were in the safety of their own bakyard, so they were fine.
After a few hours of all out war, both sides called a truce. They were all wet, cold, and tired and couldn't wait to get some toasty hot chocolate into their systems. "Hey, Phil, you want to go sleding?" Keely asked. "Yeah, that sounds like fun." Phil agreed and they went back outside.
Soon, they were standing at the top of a huge hill with a ramp at the bottom that shot you across a small stream. "You can go first."Keely said. He nodded and started to slide down, using the sled as a snowboard. He reached the bottom and made the jump, landing a good ten feet past the stream. "Nice job, Phil. That was pretty good!" Keely shouted down to him.
Keely started to slide down on her own sled, but hit the ramp at an odd angle, causing her to fly sideways, into a tree, and ultimately into a whipe-out that could have ended up on America's Funniest Home Video's. There was just one problem, she didn't get up. Phil rushed over to her, kneeling beside her. "Keely, wake up! Come on, Keel! You have to wake up!" he yelled, shaking her motionless, unconcious body.
Luckily, a few of Phil's friends happened to be on their way down to the slope and heard him screaming. "Phil, what happened?" Myron asked. "She wiped out, and I can't get her to wake up" Phil explained. "Okay, you stay here, I'll go get help!" Myron sayd, and ran back up the hill.
Fifteen minutes later, the paramedics had Keely on a stretcher and were pulling it up the hill. Phil rode with her in the ambulance to the hospital. Once there, and after what seemed likean excrutiatingly long wait, they finally let Phil in to see her. She was in a coma, had a concussion, and a broken wrist. He held her hand in his own, praying she would wake up.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:04:03 GMT -5
Chapter 5: Memories
Keely's mind was flooding with memories, mostly of her and Phil. Of all the times they had shared together this last year.
The day Phil had taken her to France for lunch
"Phil, Phil, Phil! There’s a big teacher’s conference at lunch today, so we’re all allowed to go off campus for lunch!" Keely shouted approaching Phils locker. "I know; it was on the morning announcements. I was the one who read it on the morning announcements...you were there." he reminded her, walking down the hall. "Oh, that’s right! I guess I was all wrapped up thinking about where I wanted to go. What do you think—burritos, sushi?" she pondered her options carefully. "How about French fries? Real French fries." he suggested, proudly. "Sure." she agreed, grinning happily.
Soon they were hovering over France on board the skyak. "Phil, what happens if somebody sees us?" Keely asked. "Hah! They’ll report a UFO and nobody’ll believe ‘em!" he joked. "Let’s go to Italy for dessert! I want to get a cannoli!" she declared.
Not long after that, they were back at shool, Phil enjoying French fries, and Keely, eating a cannoli. "So, when you see Italy from the Skyak, it really is shaped like a boot! Although, the heel is way too high to be comfortable. Anyway, the cannolis are awesome." she said taking a bite of the dessert.
Phil gasped and pointed Keely away from him, "What’s that!" he said. With Keely distracted, he reached over, snatched the rest of the cannoli out of her hand, and shoved it into his mouth. Keely looked completely shocked when she realized what he'd done. "Mmm, you’re right; they are awesome. Mmm, great." he replied, with a full mouth.
Then when they used the New-Ager on their science project
The plant sitting on Phil's desk was shriveled up and dry. "I think we should call it a plumen." Keely suggested, referring to the cross between plums and lemons that their project was supposed to demonstrate. "Why don't we just call it dead? Keely, why didn't you water it?" he asked, examinig the remaints of the plant. "I watered it!" she argued back. "Once. Well, there goes our semester grade." Phil said, sitting down.
"Phil, you must have some sort of super, duper future thing that can zap it back to life?" she asked. "Keely, it's not a good idea just to zap away our mistakes." he warned her. "Wait a minute. You can do it, can't you?" Keely asked, already knowing he could. Phil got a worried look on his face, realizing that he had definetly said the wrong thing. "Please, Philly Willy?" she begged, adding a puppy-dog pout no one could possibly resit. "Alright, fine...but you have to make me one promise, okay?...Don't ever call me 'Philly Willy' again!" he asked as he replaced the pot. "Deal, 'Philly Willy' off the table" she agreed.
Then there was when Phil had first seen her in her older form
Keely was waking throught the hall, approaching Phil at their locker."Ugh...Hello." Phil replied nervously, not having a clue of what was going on. "Hello, Phillip Diffy. Is that oranfe juice for me?" the older keely asked, gesturing to said drink. "Ugh...no...it's for a friend of mine." he informed the so-called stranger. "Ah, you mean that little cutie, Keely Teslow, the one who's smart, funny, and one day gonna look just like this!" she said happily. Phil's eyes went wide, "Whoa! No way! Keely, you look incredible...and I can't believe you took the New-Ager!" he replied, going from shocked to annoyed all at once. he then took away her orangr juice. "Phil, I'm sorry. I just wanted to see what I'd look like..."
Their many tennis games
"Is it me, or is this Roger guy weirdly competitive?" Phil asked, hittng the tennis ball over the net. "I'd say just plain weird." Keely answered. "Well, there's no way he's beating our invention." he said, hitting the ball to her agin. "The Pudinator!" she yelled. "That's right" Phil said.
He then knocked the ball to the ground in her court. "Yes, I win, thank you, thank you!" he shouted, enjoying his victory. "No way, Phil. That was wide!" she argued. "Keely, that was in by a mile!" he defended. "Okay, tiebreaker" Keely said, watching Phil jump over the net. A moment later, Phil had come out on top in their tiebreaker."Ha! Come on, Keely, say it! Say it!" he said smugly. "Phil Diffy, the tennis master of the universe. Now and whatever century he may live in." she announced as he bowed. "But remember; I've been tennis master eight times, you've only been it seven times." she reminded him.
Phil rolled his eyes at her, "Keely, Keely, Keely" he teased. "Don't you triple 'Keely' me!" she said, pushing him a little. Then they started to play around with their tennis rackets, using them like light sabers. "Two out of three?" he questioned. "Duh!" was Keely's response. He started to walk back to his side, but she hit him in the back with her racket. He fell over the net, shocked by her actions.
Next was when she had almost lost Phil the first time
Phil was leaning against the net at the tennis courts, sadness in his eyes, as keely came running over to him. "Phil, I got your message. Where's your racket?" Keely asked, confused. "My dad says that our Pudinator project will draw a lot of attention, and people will find out we're from the future... My family has to move." he told her grimly. "Ugh...but this is crazy. We had all these plans. we were gonna go fishing this summer, and I hate fishing. the only reason I was gonna go, was because, I thought it might be fun with you. So, when are you leaving?" Keely asked, tears instantly springing to her eyes. "Tonight." Phil said. "Tonight...I hate this, it's not fair. It seems like kids should have a say in wheter they move or not."she cried. "Tell me about it." Phil told her. "So, you wanna play one last game of tennis?" she asked, tossing him the ball. "Keely, you know I do, but i can't I have to help pack. Bye Keel." he said, hugging her. He walked away and about a foot later, he threw the tennis ball, he winced when a cat hissed, "Sorry!" he called. As Phil walked away, Keely just stood there, "Bye Phil." she whispers.
All of these memories raced through Keely's mind. Phil had not once left her side. His parents had delayed the return home, only after many hours of Phil arguing with his parents. His main point being that Keely would never forgive him if he left without saying good-bye. It had been two weeks since the accident at the hill and Phil was starting to worry she wouldn't wake up. He needed her. More than anything, he needed to talk to her, to figure out a way to stay with her forever, before he had to resort to sabotaging the time machine.
It was the sixteenth day of the coma and, once again, Phil was holding her hand. "Keely, you have to wake up, please." he begged, starting to cry. He was really starting to lose hope these last few days. His tears landed softly on her hand, as he rubbed her palm gently with his thumb. His eyes went wide as saucers when he felt her squeeze his hand. He dared to look up, and saw her eyes open. Phil was completely speechless, all he could do was hug her, and he did, and he never wanted to go.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:04:39 GMT -5
CH 6 of NSG
Chapter 6: A Simple Plan
A month had passed since Keely had woken up from her coma. His parents had dragged him back to 2121. In order to stay until she woke up, he had agreed to go back willingly. That was the price he paid in order to hear her say ' I love you' again. He had left her with a gadget he had never needed over his stay. Its use was for calling between centuries (oddly specific) as a way for Keely to cantact him in emergencies.
Phil was absolutely miserable without her. the luxuries of the future made life seem incredibly boring. He had brought a modern day CD player back with him. A CD Keely had given him for his birthday, by Simple Plan, was just one of the many things that reminded him of her. Song number three, definetly described how he felt at the time. It was called Perfect World, and it was about losing someone important to you. He put his headphones on and turned it on.
I never could’ve seen this far
I never could’ve seen this coming
It seems like my world’s falling apart, Yeah
Why is everything so hard
I don’t think that I can deal with the things you said
It just won’t go away
He had left Keely behind and alone. Had someone told him two years ago that the year 2121 would not feel like home much longer, he would never have believed him. Even his friends here didn't understand the way he was feeling. His world had come crashing down on him as soon as his dad had said those words. Words that no longer aplied to him. 'We're going home'. What was home? Where the people you cared about were? Where everyone else thought you belonged? Or where you felt special, where somebody always understood you, and you could be yourself, the place you always felt right? He just didn't know anymore. All he knew was that he felt home with Keely.
In a perfect world
This could never happen
In a perfect world
You’d still be here
And it makes no sense
I could just pick up the pieces
But to you
This means nothing
Nothing at all
His parents didn't understand either. They had no idea how much he loved her, and he could not for the life of him, explain it in words. It seemed like his happiness didn't matter to them. He knew that they had to miss 2005 too. He was sure Pim did, she had left many good friends, too. He had even tried to get her to help him. It still didn't work.
I used to think that I was strong
Until the day it all went wrong
I think I need a miracle to make it through, Yeah
I wish that I could bring you back
I wish that I could turn back time
Cause I can’t let go
I just can’t find my way, Yeah
Without you I just can’t find my way
He was lost without her. He felt so weak, for leaving her, for not telling her his feelings for her sooner, for her pain. He wished that he could go back to happier days, to when they were together, so he could change what happened. He had to find a way back. He had to. He loved her too much to let her go.
In a perfect world
This could never happen
In a perfect world
You’d still be here
And it makes no sense
I could just pick up the pieces
But to you
This means nothing
Nothing at all
I don’t know what I should do now
I don’t know where I should go
I’m still here waiting for you
I’m lost when you’re not around
I need to hold on to you
I just can’t let you go
Yeah
Yeah
He didn't know what he could do now. He had just about run out of ideas. He wracked his brain for ideas. Then one popped into his head, but he had to wait to put in motion. The timing had to be perfect for it to work.
In a perfect world
This could never happen
In a perfect world
You’d still be here
And it makes no sense
I could just pick up the pieces
But to you
This means nothing
Nothing at all
You feel nothing
Nothing at all
Nothing at all
"Maybe it's not a perfect world, but it can have a happy ending." he thought, turning off the computer.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:07:13 GMT -5
ch 7 of NSG
Chapter 7: Lost
"Maybe it's not a perfect world, but it can have a happy ending." he thought, turning off the computer.
Not five minutes later did the device that was tying him to Keely start buzzing. "Keely? Are you okay?" he asked, knowing that he had told her to use it only in emergencies.
"Phil? I have to tell you something. Promise you wont be mad?" she sounded desperate, like something really big was happening.
"Keely, I could never be mad at you. What's wrong?" he asked, his worry increasing.
"Phil, I'm..." and then he heard a loud banging noise followed by something that sounded like 'Phil help!' and then silence.
"Keely, I'm coming! Just hold on!" he yelled, almost in tears since he didn't know what was wrong. "Something is wrong. I've got to save Keely!" he told himself. He grabbed his gadgets and bolted out the door.
Not too long after that, he had managed to hotwire a time-machine and get to 2005. He went up to Keely's house and knocked on the door. No one answered. So, he tried the door, it was unlocked. He knew that was strange. Mandy Teslow was one of the weirdest people he'd met, and considering the people he lived with, that was definetly saying something.
"Keely! Where are you Keel?" he shouted and began searching the house. He made his way upstairs to Keely's room, and started searching, he found that her computer was on and noticed she had several email's from the same person. He opened one of them.
To: K e e l y 7 8 9 0 a o l . c o m
From: H o t s t u f f y a h o o . c o m
Hey keely, its me, tanner, I wanted to know, since that loser Phil finally left, will you go out with me? how can u refuse such a genorous offer? i mean i am the most popular guy in school...
Phil read several more letters like this before leaving the room to avoid destroying keely's computer. "Tanner, you have Keely, I know you do..." he muttered to himself, exiting Keely's house and walkng the few blocks to Tanner's house.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:07:58 GMT -5
chapter 8 of NSG
Chapter 8: Found
"Tanner, you have Keely, I know you do..." Phil muttered to himself, exiting Keely's house and walkng the few blocks to Tanner's house.
After knocking on the door several times, and upon getting no response, he backed up and kicked the door, leaaving shattered wood fragments behind as he raced up the stairs. "Tanner! Keely! Where are you?" he yelled, running from room to room, before finally finding a locked door.
"Open up!" he yelled, giving only a seconds worth of time for someone to comply with his command before making his own door.
What he saw when the door was out of his way made his blood run cold. Keely, who was unconcious, bloody, and beaten, lie motionless on Tanner's bedroom floor. He feared the worse as he looked her over, seeing if there were any obvious injuries he could help, to his relief, no bones appeared to be broken. She had four deep gashes on her back and had several bruises. Then he realized exactly what Tanner had done to her. He had attacked her, beaten her, and worst of all, raped her. He pulled her into his arms and never wanted to let go, but if he wanted to save her, he was going to have to.
Several minutes after calling, an ambulance arrived. One of the EMT's asked what happened, and Phil explained everything, except for the future part, and watched as the loaded her into the medic. "Can I go with her?" he asked, pretty sure they would say no.
"Go ahead," the lead paramedic agreed, as they prepare to head for the hospital. It was then that he noticed the slight bulge in her stomach. Then it clicked. Earlier she had said she needed to tell him something. He thought back to their breif conversation.
"Keely? Are you okay?" he asked, knowing that he had told her to use it only in emergencies.
"Phil? I have to tell you something. Promise you wont be mad?" she sounded desperate, like something really big was happening.
"Keely, I could never be mad at you. What's wrong?" he asked, his worry increasing.
"Phil, I'm..."
Pregnant. That was what she was about to tell him. "Will the baby be okay?" he asked, the question seeming to come out of nowhere. All was silent for a minute. "We don't know, It depends on hw much blood she lost and how bad the attack was," one of the EMT's explained, just as they pulled into the hospital.
They rolled Keely away and made Phil stay behind in the waiting room. hough this gave Phil some time to go over everything that had happened within the last hour, he still felt like every minute was an hour. "Tanner if Keely doesn't wake up, or if you killed my child... I swear I'll kill you." he muttered to himself.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:08:32 GMT -5
chapter 9
Chapter 8: Information
"Tanner if Keely doesn't wake up, or if you killed my child... I swear I'll kill you." he muttered to himself.
After an hour or so one of the nurses came out to get Phil. He asked her tons of questions but she simply said that the doctor would explain everything a little later. 'Great, more waiting...' he thought as the turned down yet another hallway and stopped at an open door. "The police want to talk to you and to her when she wakes up." the nurse said and left him alone with her.
"Oh, that's reassuring, what if I'd been Tanner..." he mumbled, so mad at himself for not getting to her sooner that he took it out on other peolple. "Keely, I'm here now, and I'm never leaving you, ever again" he cried, taking her hand. He looked her over, taking in the damage Tanner had done. She had a black eye over her left eye. Both of her wrists had handshaped bruises on them, and thats just what he could see, he was almost scared to see what lie behind the sheet and hospital gown.
A moment later the doctor came in, she announced herself as Dr. Jamie Thompson, a specialist in cases like Keely's. "Could you explainher injuries to me, please?" he asked, never taking her eyes off of Keely.
"Rape is any form of sexual activity that a person doesn't agree to, ranging from touching to penetration. Rape is a crime even if you already know the person who attacked you - the person in this case was a friend. It's a crime even if she didn't fight back since she was unconscious. The best thing to do when someone is raped is to get them to the hospital as fast as you can. Once at the hospital the doctors will perform a rape kit, which is where they collect evidence that the attcker may have left behind, clothing fibers, saliva, hairs or even semen. They'd use all of that in court, normally we'd test for pregnancy, or give the morning after pill, but..." she started to explain, Phil nodded, knwing what she meant.
"Is the baby okay?" he asked.
"We'll know soon enough. It takes time to tell if the fetus is okay. As for her other injries, she has several broken ribs, Her left carsus (wrist) is broken, she has quite a few bruises, and she'll be really sore when she wakes up. She probably won't want to walk for a few days. You're the only one she's responded to so far," she said, gesturing to the hand that reused to release his. "If you're there for her, she might take everything better. Help her keep her mind off of it. When she wakes up, let her cry and remind her that none of this is her fault, or yours, before you start blaming yourself. Rape is a crime and she should and by the look in your eyes, will press charges against this guy. Now, i've got to finish my rounds, you can stay with her, and I'll be back later." she finished, and quickly left the room.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:09:01 GMT -5
Chapter 10: Awakening
The doctor finished explaining Keely's condition to him and left the room.
Phil had started to fall asleep in the chair next to Keely's bed, still holding her hand. "Phil...?" a weak voice muttered.
"Keel'?" he said, groggily, quickly pulling himself out of his light sleep. "How do you feel? Do you remeber anything?" Phil asked, as she grabbed his hand to make sure he was really there.
"Is it really you? Are you really here?" she asked, staring up at him. He nodded, "Yes, Keel, it's me, and I promise you that I'm never leaving again. My home is with you." he said. Without a word, she pulled him close to her, hugging him with all the strength she had. "Do you know?" she asked trying to put her hands on her stomach and finding one wrapped in plaster. "Yeah, it kinda hit me in the ambulance on the way here. They still don't kow if the baby's okay yet." he told her, anticipating the next question.
"Did they catch Tanner?" she asked, the memories of what he had done to her fashing through her mind, causing her to shake, which irritated her broken ribs. "IT's okay. It's gonna be okay. I'll be here for you as long as you need me here, I even have permission to stay here after visiting hours. They said that you'll be really sore and you probably won't want to move much." he told her.
It was then that she started to cry, more like sob, actually. He carefully slid into the small bed with her, let her cry on his shoulder, she had told him that everything felt right when she was in his arms, he hoped it was still true. "D you want to talk about it?" he asked, not sure if that was the right question. She nodded against his chest.
"I was about to tell you... Then Tanner came in a-and grabbed me..." she sobbed. He gripped her tighter at the mention of her rapists name. "He took me back to his... house and took me to his room..." she continued through the sobbing. "The entire time he was touching me, I was wishing you were there to stop him. To save me, to let me sit in your arms..." Phil ran his fingers through her hair, trying to comfort her. "After a minute he had my clothes off and I couldn't get him off of me... he was too strong. After he...finished, he noticed my stomach... he started slashing my back. After that he pulled some of my clothes back on and left, right before I passed out, I saw you burst in and I knew I was safe," she finished, and her sobbing picked up again.
"Keel' it's not your fault. Tanner is the only one to blame, and he should pay for what he did. It's gonna be hard, but it will put him where he belongs so he can never hurt you again. When I found out what he did to you and then realized you were pregnant, I was ready to kill him, but I know that doing that wouldn't solve anything,so I'll leave it up to you if you want to press charges or not, I'll stand by you." he promised, as her tears subsided.
"I want to put him in jail." she said sternly, as three familiar people walked into the room.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:09:45 GMT -5
Chapter 11: Confrontation
"I want to put him in jail." she said sternly, as three familiar people walked into the room.
"Mom! Dad! Pim! What are you doing here?" he asked, now rather concerned that they'd drag him back to 2122.
"What are WE doing here? What are YOU doing here?" his father boomed.
"Keely was in trouble. I wasn't just going to let her die." he said, making a note of the fact that they still hadn't realized that he was in the hospital with her for a reason. "I'm not going back with you. I belong here. Not in 2122. My family is here." he said, holding keely close.
"Phil, what are you talking about? And why is Keely in the hospital?' " Pim asked finally realizing that Keely was there.
"If you guys really loved me you wouldn't make me choose between you and Keely. But, if you insist, I pick Keely. And Keely is here because Tanner attacked her and then beat her because he realized that she was pregnant." Phil explained, leaving out the gruesome details.
"Pregnant?" Lloyd growled, furious at his son's irresponsibility.
"Yeah, dad. As in 'carrying my child' pregnant," Phil repeated, ignoring the shocked looked on all three of his family members faces. "I'm not going back! I'm staying here with Keely and our baby. This last month has been hell for me. I was completely miserable. And neither of you seemed to care. This is my home, this is where I belong." he tried to make them understand.
"Yeah, dad. I wanna stay here, too." Pim agreed, sitting on the edge of Keely's rather crowded bed.
"Fine, I give up. You three stay here.I'll head back to get some stuff. I'll be back in a few days." Lloyd accepted the situation, realiziing if he didn't he'd lose his son. he turned to leave and left Keely, Phil, Pim and Barbara alone.
"Hey, Phil, can I talk to you a minute out in the hall?" his mother asked him. He nodded, and reluctantly left Keely alone in the room, talking with Pim. "What really happened to Keely?" she asked once in the hallway.
"Tanner, that guy she dated, abdcted her, took her back t his house, and raped her. I found her in a heap on his bedroom floor. She has a broken wrist, some fractured ribs, and has tons of bruises and three big gashes on her back. And we don't even know if the baby is okay yet." he explained, and finally released his own tears. leaning on his mother's shoulder and crying. After a moment he calmed down and headed back in to stay with Keely.
Not long after that did Dr.Thompson arrive. "Ah, you're awake. The police will be by tomorrow to ask you some questions. Has your stomach been hurting you since you woke up?" the doctor questioned, Keely shook her head 'no'. "That's good, it means your baby is probably okay, but I'll need to do an ultrasound to make sure, okay?" Phil and Keely both nodded.
Once the equipment was set up, Dr. Thompson started the exam and pointed out different parts of their barely developed child. "Good news, your baby checks out completely fine, which is rather surprising die to the amout of trauma you sustained within the last two months. Try not to end up here agin or it might not get so lucky." the doctor explained giving the child a clean bill of health.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:11:38 GMT -5
Chapter 12: Nightmares
By that night Pim, and Barbara had headed back to their old house, to start fixing it up a little. Phil and Keely were still in the hospital. He noticed she was having some trouble getting to sleep, so he slid in next to her, carefully wrapping his arms around her, avoidding the slash marks on her back.
"Phil?" she asked, half asleep.
"Yeah, it's me. Is this okay?" he asked, gently taking her hand in his. She nodded and started to drift off to sleep.
A few hours passed, but they were restless for Keely. She kept seeing Tanner, during the attack. The fact that he was still out there. Thus began another nightmare, about Tanner showing up and killing them all. She woke up around three in a cold sweat. Phil's arms still protectively wrapped around her. She somehow managed to shift so she was facing his chest. Like the night before her accident she rand her hand along his chest, which, a moment later, had him awake.
"What's wrong Keel?" he asked noticng her distress.
"Nothing. I just had a nightmare. I had to make sure you were still here. It all seemed so real," she told him, hugging him again. "Tanner's still out there, he could come here and hurt you or our child..." he cut off her rant.
"Or you... Don't worry, there are two armed police officers outside your door, Tanner can't hurt you. And if he did get in here, I'd never let him near you." he promised her. After a few minutes he gently kissed her as she turned around, He held her right hand with his and placed it over her stomach. Not another nightmare woke Keely up that night.
In the morning the detectives arrived to ask them questions. After abot and hour, they had all the information they needed, and excused themselves.
"I'm sorry I woke you up last night," she told him, still resting in his arms.
"It's okay. That's what I'm here for. I can't imagine how hard this is for you. I just want to be there for you. Forever," he said, kissing her forehead.
"I love you so much" she said.
"I love you, too, Keel" he replied,
Just then the door opened and someone neither of them wanted to see appeared. "Tanner, what the heck are you doing here?" Phil yelled jumping out of the bed.
"I'm here to finish what I started. Now, get out of my way," he said, shoving Phil out of his path. Tanner lunged for Keely. But, Phil moved in. He dove on top of Tanner, attempting to stop him from ever touching Keely again.
"Get away from her!" Phil yelled, slamming his fist into Tanner's face. Temporarily restraining the rapist. A moment later one of the armed guards that were supposed to be watching the door, stepped in to see what all the commotion was about.
"How did he get in here?" Phil asked, handing Tanner over.
"We had to go talk to our commanding officer, we thought you'd be fine for five minutes." the second officer explained, dragging the semi-conscious Tanner out the door. He was glaring daggers at Phil and Keely.
After several more minutes of Phil lecturing the officers, they left to take Tanner to the police station, leaving Phil and Keely alone. "Are you okay?" she asked him, noticong his hand was bruised from the force of his punch.
He nodded, "I should be asking you that,"
"Yeah, I'm fine, you tackled him before he got close enough," she said, pulling him close to her again.
"See, your nightmare didn't come true," he said, kissing her, gently.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:11:57 GMT -5
Chapter 13 : Arrangements
A week had passed and Phil had not once left her side. Today she was to be released from the hospital. Phil and Keely were walking from the hospital to give them some time to talk alone. They decided to stop in the park, seeing as Keely was still a little sore.
"You're moms still on her buisness trip, right?" Phil asked, as Keely sat on the swing and he started pushing her.
"Yep. She called yesterday, she'll be a few more months," Keely told him.
"Do you want to stay with us? That way if you get another nightmare you can wake me up easily," he suggested.
"Is it okay with your parents?" she asked, liking the idea.
"It took some convincing, but they agreed," he said, remembering the conversation he had had with his family earlier.
"Mom, Dad, if Keely wants to, can she stay here?" he asked them. His dad had returned a few days after leaving.
He recieved a "Sure" from his mom, and a "Not a chance" from his dad.
"It's not like it'll get her pregnant," Pim butted in. Phil sent an awkward glance toward his sister.
"Fine..." Lloyd agreed, "We'll put a bigger bed on your room."
"Okay. I'll stay with you. Phil, what about school, I mean I'll be okay now, but after summer, when we go back, and I start to show..." she asked, getting worried.
"Keel, I'll be there with you all the way. I won't let anything happen to you, and, if you want we could homeschool, it's not that bad..." he suggested.
"Yeah, that might be a good idea, but we'll take it as it comes," she agreed, as they started to walk again, finally stopping at Keely's house where she packed up some of her things and then proceeded to Phil's house.
That night Keely lay sleeping in Phil's arms. Around three she woke up, in tears, Phil was getting rather used to this and had found several ways of comforting her.
"Keely, it's okay. Tanner's gone he can't hurt you ever again," he said, trying to relax her a little bit.
"Lullaby Lullaby
Baby-o
Both of us know that it's time to go
Nighty, night, night
Sleepy bye-o
Lullaby baby-o
I love you so my baby-o
So much more than you'll ever know
From the top of your head to your cute little toes
I love you, my baby-o
Lullaby Lullaby
Baby-o
Both of us know that it's time to go
Nighty, night, night
Sleepy bye-o
Lullaby baby-o"
Phil sung the lullaby that she had made him memorize. He had learned that her father had sung that to her just before he left to go into the army.She had made him promise to sing it to their child once it was born. But, he had learned it was a great way to get her back to sleep after a Tanner induced nightmare.
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Post by potffangirl1129 on Oct 7, 2005 0:12:23 GMT -5
Chapter 14: Surprises (Part 1)
Two months had passed since Keely's release from the hospital. In that time her nightmares subsided, and she could sleep peacefully through the night as long as she was in Phil's arms. Their sophomore year was over and summer had just begun. No one had seemed to notice Keely's change in wardrobe or attitude...sometimes.
But, today, none of that mattered. Today was Keely's sixteenth birthday, the day of Mandy Teslow's return, and the day that they could find out the sex of their baby. Pim, Barbara, Lloyd and Keely's mother were helping Phil with a surprise party. He would go with her to the doctor's and upon their return, everyone would jump out and yell 'Surprise!'
"I can't wait until we find out, then we can paint... not that it will take much effort with your handy gadgets. And we can start picking out names and clothes and things like that!" she beamed, happily from the passenger seat of Phil's new car. This was one of Keely's good days, for the last few weeks they would get into the occasional arguement, but half-way through the fight one of them realized how incredibly stupid whatever it was they were disagreeing about was, and that it was simply a result of Keely's raging hormones, leading to a peaceful apology.
For the rest of their drive to the local hospital, they talked about how different their lives would be and about the things the needed to do before their child's birth. Once they arrived at the hospital they signed in and took a seat in the waiting room. "So, Keel, what do you want for your birthday?" Phil asked, holding her hand in his.
"I don't know. I feel like I already have the best presents in the world," she said, leaning her head against his shoulder.
"And what might that be?" he asked.
"You and this baby. When I found out, I thought I would be scared, because I was alone. But, once you were back in my life, it all feels so right," Keely explained as the doctor called them back.
Several minutes later, many people in the waiting room were jolted back to earth when a loud, girlish svream sounded from down the hall. "YES! IT"S A GIRL!" Keely screamed, causing Phil to cover his ears and attempt to calm Keely down at the same time. A smile spread across his face as he watched the screen from the ultrasound, showing his growing child's heartbeat and ever-active movements.
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