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Post by surrealpink on Jun 12, 2005 14:48:17 GMT -5
lol.. another 'childhood poem' haha Uninspired, tired, exhausted and wasted Constantly hating you and all the things you do ticked off, irritated, getting up from my fall Everything you do just drives me up the wall My thoughts are indistinct, my mind is unaware The things i see as common i also see as rare There's nothing you can do to make me feel all right There's nothing you can say to make me see the light But you had everything to do with it... you started it all You never caught me till after the fall Now i'm getting up and walking away I see nothing...no reason for me to stay
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Post by ♥~Mel Diffy~♥ on Jun 13, 2005 11:37:38 GMT -5
Wow, that's really good. You've got some talent there haha
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Post by surrealpink on Jun 13, 2005 11:43:38 GMT -5
LoL.. thanks meL!!
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Post by ♥~Mel Diffy~♥ on Jun 13, 2005 20:12:06 GMT -5
np!
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Post by browneyessparkling on Jun 17, 2005 20:42:58 GMT -5
Wow, Janine, that was VERY good!
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Post by surrealpink on Jun 17, 2005 22:05:44 GMT -5
thank youuuuuuuu [hyper mode today.. gotta love the weekends!!]
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philsbabe2504
Berwick's Angel
I love Legolas..., I love Legolas..., I love Legolas...,
Posts: 127
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Post by philsbabe2504 on Jun 21, 2005 12:45:53 GMT -5
Wow, that was like, amazing! I write some poems too, and some stories, but I don't know if I should post them. This one was AMAZING!!
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Keisuke Koide
Fashion Zombie
It's not that I don't love you but, to tell you that I love you is the hardest thing I will ever do.
Posts: 80
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Post by Keisuke Koide on Nov 16, 2005 3:40:37 GMT -5
LoVe tHaT pOeM....
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Post by Femtimon on Jan 14, 2006 20:36:45 GMT -5
Gosh, how does everyone keep writing stuff that relates to me. This makes me think of my father, sometimes! The nerve of that man.
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