trespetite06
Stranded Time Traveler
So kiss me and smile for me. Tell me that you'll wait for me. Hold me like you'll never let me go.
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Post by trespetite06 on Nov 17, 2005 22:50:30 GMT -5
hey guys!....so im new here so this is my first little post...but yeah so heres a poem i wrote...and it kinda reminded me of POFT. hope ya'll like it Time is short, the night is young, so baby lets make this last. We'll lay in each other's arms under a blanket of stars. We'll hum to the song of the wind and the whistle of the trees. Afterwards we'll drive down that deserted highway in this old cadillac. Windows down, hands out, baby this is the best time of my life. We'll listen to the old rock you like...and baby we'll close our eyes and this...this is perfect. Let's connect our hands and walk down that sandy shore. The water is just right, and what's better is the way your eyes are tonight. It's beginning to rain, falling mad, just like my heart. We'll run in the grass, let the water soak between our toes. My feet are lifting off the ground, im reaching for your lips, and halfway in between we meet. Yeah, this feels right. In the falling rain here we are, and baby I dont know where we are but all i know is that...time is short, the night is young so baby lets make this last.
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Post by ♥~Mel Diffy~♥ on Nov 17, 2005 23:04:43 GMT -5
Hey, that's pretty good Totally fits Pheely lol
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trespetite06
Stranded Time Traveler
So kiss me and smile for me. Tell me that you'll wait for me. Hold me like you'll never let me go.
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Post by trespetite06 on Nov 18, 2005 22:27:51 GMT -5
thank you
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hilly
Berwick's Angel
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Post by hilly on Nov 19, 2005 19:15:54 GMT -5
That is good! I totally agree that it fits Pheely! You're good!
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Post by Femtimon on Jan 14, 2006 20:41:17 GMT -5
Yeah, that is awesome. Not only does it relate to Pheely, but it kinda reminds me of Pixel Perfect. You know, how Roscoe really liked Sam and the part where Loretta's in the rain.
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