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Perfect
Jan 16, 2006 8:37:27 GMT -5
Post by surrealpink on Jan 16, 2006 8:37:27 GMT -5
Okay, So I squeezed something out, despite my writer's block. I think it kind of sucks, but hey, I guess it's a start on my road to recovery!
Perfect. I thought you were perfect. It didn’t matter that you made mistakes, All that mattered was that you said you loved me. And for me, that was enough. For me, that was perfect.
Perfect. I thought our life was perfect. I thought we had it all. But somewhere along the way, You turned your back. You left me, broken and alone.
Perfect. I thought it was all real. That nothing could go wrong. Now I’ve come to realize There’s no such thing as perfection. Perfect is just a word.
so whaddya think?
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Perfect
Jan 16, 2006 9:28:40 GMT -5
Post by ♥~Mel Diffy~♥ on Jan 16, 2006 9:28:40 GMT -5
That's pretty good! The title & the poem itself immediately reminded me of Pixel Perfect. haha
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boricua4ever
Berwick's Angel
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Perfect
Jan 18, 2006 16:52:34 GMT -5
Post by boricua4ever on Jan 18, 2006 16:52:34 GMT -5
yeah it totally reminded me of the movie. I think it was really good, kinda sad but good cause I love sad songs and poems.
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