boricua4ever
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Post by boricua4ever on Jul 28, 2006 12:40:12 GMT -5
This is the second part of the other fanfic I made so, obviously, you have to read the first one to understand it because the begining is part of the ending of the other one, hope you understand what i mean.
Barbara a nd Lloyd were in the leaving room having some drinks when Pim entered and slamed the door and stayed in front of it, pushing herself against it so no one could open it. She was breathless. -I ran all the way from school...-she took a deep breath again- another reason why I hate this stupid century. -Pim, what is wrong with you?Is that sttawberry shportcake wanna be..."Today is a happy day, Let's make the world a happy place" -Pim I still don't understand. Pim went and sat down near her mother. -Is that Debbie Berwick... My first day in 2008 and she uis driving me crazy, again! -Ohh she just wants to be your friend. There's nothing wrong with that. -But mom...- she got interruptedf by Phil who went in slaming the door too. -What's wrong with you?- said Pim. -I think we'll have to start fixing the front door before we start fixing the time machine. Phil went upstairs and locked the door of hisroom. He looked at his almost empty room and sat oin his bed staring at the walls. At dinner time he was very quiet. -Phil come on, I understand the taste is not the best, in fact, is horrible- Barbara looked at him ofended- but you've got to eat something- he continued. -Honey, what hapened? You were so excited to see Keely and now you are acting like this. -Nopthing. -Nothing,honey, you can't fool me. I know when your nothings are really a nothing and when they are hiding a something. -I don't want to talk about it. -Well changing the subject. I think we are going to spend a lot of toime her 'cause I have no idea of what is wrong with the time machine. -Well that stinks 'cause I can't wait 'til we get out of this century and go back to our home.- Said Phil and left. -Wo! talk about an attitude change- said pim impresed- May I also be excused. -But you're not done yet. You haven't even tried the salad i made. -am mom, after having to swallow your spagetti with fruit and sauce I think i'm preety done here. Besides I don't think salad is supposedto be smoking, toasted or have this particular black color.- She said staring at the repugnant looking salad and then left. Later that night, Phil was outside staring at the sky thinking about the good times he had spent with Keely two years ago. His dad sat on his side. -Hey what's bothering you?- He asked even thought he knew the answer. -It's Keely. She has a boyfriend. -Ohh that is bad, very bad. -Yeah... I thought she would be waiting for me... I told hjer I loved her and... she told me she loved me too...but I guess even love can't wait too long. -Maybe it isn't true love- Phil looked at him sadly and impresed- Or maybe this is just an obstacle in your way so when you pass through it you'll both know you love eachother for real. -Is just I'm so angry with her. I don't think I can see her again, I don't knowif I want to see her again. -Now Phil you can't hide or run away from your prtoblems. You have to face them, sooner or later, be strong, know what i mean. Phil kept in silence then sombody knock on the door and a familiar voice said; -Its me. I just wante to give you something I made. Lloyd looked at Phil. -Guess you'll have to face it sooner than later. LLoyd went to open the door, Barbara too. -Hey Mr. and Mis Diffy. I made this, is a welcoming cake, I hope you like it. -mmm I love cake, chocolate cake, vanilla cake, cake, cake-said Lloyd -Lloyd control yourself, is for everyone. Come on in Keely. Thak you, it looks delicious. -Thanks -So do you want to see Phil? -Well Ok -Phil, Keely is here. -Hey Phil. Hoiw are you?-she sat on his side -Miserable -I know...maybe I shouldn't have came this soon- she paused for for a minute staring at the sky too then she lloked at phil.-Phil look, you are very important to me, even ifnow I have a boyfriend. You still are my bestfriend in the whole entire universe. Please don't let this situation ruin all that. -I don't want to but it will never be the same, I won't feel the same with you, at least not now and I don't think you'll feel the same way with me. Keel;y staed quiet. Phil was right, she will never feel the same way with him, it will never be the same after their kiss. To tell the thruth she never stoped liking him, she just met this boy who was really nice, they became good friends and after some time they became boyfriend and girlfriend but she never forgot about Phil. She was going crazy, she tried to forget about Phil with Michael because she thought Phil was never coming back buut still it was imposible and now Phil reappears in her life... She wasn't sure what to do. -This is crazy- SHe sighted finnally. -What? -Everything-she look him in the eye, she was almost crying- everything is so confusing. I don't know what should I do, I don't even know what I want to do- a tear fell from her eye and ran to her cheek. Phil didn't even think before he dried it with his finger.They stayed quiet for a moment looking into eachother's eyes. Phil wanted to kiss her so much, she didn't knew what to do. They were together and everything else disapeared, it was so beutiful."how can Keely posibly throw this away" Philk thought. "How can I posibly throw this away" Keely wondered."could it be posible that she feels this way with Michael?" Phil wondered."I defenitly don't feel this way with Michael"Keely thought "Can't she just break uop with him" Phil thought. "But I can't break up with him, I just can't" Keely looked away. -I can't do this, someday your dad will fix the time machine and you will leave and I will stay, again. Phil didn't say a word -I'm goig home. Are you goig to school tomorow? -Maybe, nothing's sure with me. -Well bye. The next day it was horrible for the two of them. Everytime Michael holded her hand, gave here a hug or put his arm around her, Keely and Phil felt weird and bad. Pim also had a bad day. She went to school and met her new teacher and had to deal with Debbie and Danny who, united, were a mayor pain. She also had to deal with another pain: Candida, who was now more anoying than ever. -Jm I smell loser... well of course if it is Pimple again. Remember those days girls-the girls started laughing in that anoying way that drove Pim insane.-"IUts so good to see you, I missed you so much"- She looked at the girls and the girls burst ou laughing. -ji ji ji This is me caring of what you say- Pim made a sad face- But don't worry, I'm over it now. Candida got tired of lstening to Pim and left with the girls.
There's more is just I have to go now but I'll write the rest here when I can so remember to check this topic because I will put the other part here not in other topic.
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adam
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Post by adam on Aug 26, 2006 13:12:37 GMT -5
please write soon this is intresting.
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boricua4ever
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Post by boricua4ever on Aug 28, 2006 19:09:37 GMT -5
OK I'm back. Pim Clsed the door of her locker and screamed when she saw Debbie there. -Hi Pim! oh my gosh, we have a lot of catching up to do. It have been two long years since you left. Goddie! -Ughh "great 'cause I'm your best friend in the whole world"- Pim made a face. -Dah, now turn around and close your eyes, Pimsy. Pim close her eyes and turned around and Debbie put a bracelet on Pim's hand. -Ok, Open your eyes! Pim didn't wanted to see what kind of gift Debbie bo8ght for her but she had no choice and slowly and painfuly opened her eyes. She saw the bracelet and it wasn't so bad. -Guess I should say thanks now. -You're welcome. -I never said "thak you"- Pim turned around and walked towards her classroom, Debbie followed her. When it was time to go home everyone hurried out. Michael said goodbye to Keely and then Phil came close to her. -Hey- said Phil. -Oh hey. You are walking home too? -Yeap and I thought I could give you some company. -Cool. When they got to Keely's home they stoped. -Well This is your stop. -Yeah... hey, do you want to go to the mall later? like the old times. Phil smiled. -Sure, like the old times. Phil kept walking to his home.Later that afternoon he got ready to meet Keely to go to the mall. -Hey, you are smiling again!- said Barbara excited.-Where are you going? -To the mall with Keely. -Ohh Ok but don't be late for dinner. -I wont Phiol left with Keely. They were very excited. -Remember when I used to make you come with me to buy clothes or to the spa. ja ja ja -Yeah I'd like not to. They had a great time toguether that afternoon. After a while both decide to go to their homes to eat. -Hey Keel, do you want to eat dinner with us? -Ok, why not They got to Phil's home and started eating. -Pim. who gave you that bracelet? -Ughh! Debbie Berwick. "Is a bestfriend bracelet, 'cause I'm her best friend"- she said imitating Debbie's voice. -Is very cute. How sweet of her. Pim rolled her eyes. -Keely, I have an idea! Do you want to go skyacking after we eat? -Great Idea! When Phil went to get the syack ready keely's cellphone rang. It was Micheal, he wanted to invite Keely to his home so they could study together. Keely didn't Knew what to do, she alreay studied bye herself plus she was having a great time with Phil. She hesitated a little. -Amm I already studied by myself ,hon. -But please come. I want to see you. -Is ....just... -Where are you anyways? I hear other voices. -I'm with a friend. -Who? -Phil -Come on ,Keel!- said Phil excited. Keely looked at Phil sadly, she didn't wanted to leave but Micheal was convincing her. -Who do you rather be with, Keely, your boyfriend or... Phil? -Please, Michael, don't start. I'll be there- keely hang up the phone- Amm....I think you'll have to take a reincheck on the syack, Phil. -Ohh...Ok, I guess. -Bye- Keely left sadly. She was having such a great time with Phil and she obviously didn't wanted to leave but at the sametime her bofriend wanted to see her and she also wanted to be with him, but not as much as she wanted to stay with Phil. The next day they went to school. The gang was all together at lunch laughing and talking. -So...you guys are going to the dane this friday? -I guess- said Via -Of course we are going and we are going toguether, right Keely.- said Michael excited. Keely smiled at him and agreeded with her head. Via looked at Phil. -And you Phil? -I don't think so. -Why?- she asked but Phil didn't answer, he just looked to some other way. -Yeah Phil, Its going to be great!- said Keely. -I don't feel liike partying- he said finally. Keely understood the message and stayed quiet. Owen and Via understood too and changed the subject. At his home Phil went ot get something to eat on the refrigerator. Pim was watching a magazine. -So here is where the fashion sombies get their so called "fashion".- Phil glimpsed at the magazine and had to take a second look because he couldn't believe his eyes. There was a beutiful girl with golden hair and enchanting blue-green eyes. Pim turned the page. -Wait, wait. Turn back that page. -O...K- said Pim wondering what was wrong. Phil stared at the girl with a little smile on his lips. -What's wrong?- asked Pim- Hey did you already forgot about your little sweethear, Keely? Now you're checking out girls you don't even know.- Phil rolled his eyes and started to eat the last bite of Keely's ckae. Sudenly his eyes sparkled, he just had a great idea. -But I could know her.... Pim I need that magazine! -Am I rigth thinking my big brother is going to break the rules!! -Pim give me the magazine! Please! -And yes I am right!- said Pim making fun of him- So...what are you planning to do with...- She read the name of the girl on the page-...Rachel Smith? Phil got tired of listening to Pim and took the magazine frm her hands and went to his room leaving the cake on the table. Pim turned around. -Well if you don't want the cake the it's mine- she took a bite and then Phil came and took the plate and the spoon from Pim's hands. -Thak you but I do want it- and he left. -What? ...and you left me empty handed- she said shocked- I can't believe this! I must be sick- she said touching her forehead. Phil was now in his room finishing the cake. He was planning to use the wizzard to get himself a "date" for the dance and see if Keely got jealous. The next day everyone was taling about the dance. Owen invited Via and, miracleously, saud yes,; Keely was going with her boyfriwend, Michael and Phil was now planning to go with "Rachel Smith". At luncn they talked about the dance. -Phil are yo ustill not going to the dance?- asked Via. -Yeah Phil, you shouldn't miss it. Its going to be fun. If you want I can get you a date. -No...no. Actually I changed my mind. I am going and I have a date but thanks anyway, michael. -A date?- said keely surprised. -Yeah...I'm very excited! -Nice- Keely pretended to be happy for Phil but she was just...confused. When school was over Keely and Phil were going to their home. -So who's you date for the dance? -Ohh...her name is Rachel. -Rachel....Rachel....Its doesn't ring any bells. Does she goes to our school? -No...she doesn't -Ohh...but where did you meet her then? Phil didn't thought of that before and took a moment to answer. -Ohh well...we met...we met in the hardware store wher emy dad works, yeah. We spend like hours talking and well since she was so nice I decided to invite her to the dance. -Well that's...that's great. We are going to have a blast-said Keely trying to believe herself. -Yeah, you and your date, me and my date and Owen and Via....Who would have expected that? ja ja -Yeah- smiled Keely. They kept walking towards their homes.
Ok so that's all for now but I have more is just I forgot to bring the other notebook here( 'cause yes my computer isn't fixed yet) so I'll write as soon as I can.
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adam
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Post by adam on Aug 31, 2006 14:42:42 GMT -5
Hurry and write back soon PLEASE! You should think about being an author when you grow up.
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boricua4ever
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Post by boricua4ever on Oct 15, 2006 19:13:32 GMT -5
^^^ Aww thank you. Well I finally have a new computer so I hope istop having problems with the computers so I'll write very soon. Maybe this week if I don't get too much work at school but there's one thing I can promise: you are going to like the rest of it, lol. Just kiding I hope you like the rest but is long I just don't know how to end it.
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boricua4ever
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Post by boricua4ever on Oct 15, 2006 21:16:06 GMT -5
OK I'mback. My concience was killing me knowing I could write today while I was doing other stuff so I am going to write a little.
When Phil got Home Pim was reading another magazine and smiling. -This is so great... I am a genius!!! -No way! You decided to becopme one of the fashion zombies. -ahh never. That's an insult to my persona. -Then why you keep reading those fashion magazines? -Well is non of you business but I'll tell you, i'll tell you. I just had the greates idea to embarase Candida and her clan. I'm going to become the new fashion Guru. Muajajaja...muajajaja. Yeah don't say it, I know...I am great.- Phil rolled his eyes and went upstairs. Pim stayed in the sofa. -So what should I do, what should I do. Should I make them wear hidious clothes first o ridiculos make up?....or both, ja ja ja.
The next day was the day of the dance. At night Phil got ready for the dance. He was looking great, very handsome. He got the wizard and passed it over the magazine and then, after pushing a botton, the girl that used to be on the magazine appeared on front of him. She stared at everything around her with curiosity. Phil smiled. -Hi -Where am I? This is my home but soon you'll be at a party in my school.- said Phil excited. -Why? and who are you? -I am Phil and you are here because I needed a date for the dance but no one can know we just met. We have to act as if we've known eachother for a while and I need you to act like you like me. -Why? Phil was getting annoyed. -Because...because I need you to Ok. -Ok, that wont be hard to do 'cause you are kinda hot. Phil smiled a litle surprised and Rachel gave him a flirty smile.
At the dance Owen, Via, Keely and Michael were having a great time toguether. -Well it seems like Phil changed his mind, again.-said Michael. -Yeah, I wonder why he isn't here. -Well don't wonder anymore. He is here.- said Via. -And look at his date! She is smoking!- said Owen and Via stared at him angry because of what he had said. -Did you forgot you alreay have a dae? He didn't answer. -Ok Rachel, it's showtime. You know what to do, right? -Of course, sweetie- she said holding his hand. Phil smiled and they went towards Phil's friends. Keely was speakless, staring at Phil and his date. She couldn't believe Phil got over her so fast and now was with that girl he just met, plus he looked so dreamy.MIchael was speakless too, he was impressed by Phil's date. He thought she was gorgeous but he tried not to let it show. -Hey guys. -Hey. -Hi Phil. -Hey dude and hey....gorgeous.- said Owen. -ja ja She is Rachel, my date. -Hi everyone- She said nicely. Everyone started dancing. After some songs they decided to rest a little. -Rachel, do you want me to get some punch? -Ohh yeah, thank you. Phil left with the guys. The girls stayed talking. -So, Rachel, where did you met Phil? -I met him at the hardware store. _Right. Rachel stared at PHil. -Ohh Isn't he amazing- she sighted. -I guess....-said Keely feeling unconfortable. -He is cute, funny. He is super nice, I love spending time with him. -He is...-said Keely forgetting the girls were there. When she realized they were there. They, both, looking at Keely- I...I mean I love spending time with him too. - "Right"- said Via in a weird tone. The boys were also talking while getting the punch. -Yo Phil, how did you get that date? and where can I get one?- said Owen. -Yeah dude, doon't tell Keely I said this, she is hot. -Well I met her days ago in the hardware stora where my dad works. -What the heck was she doing in a hardware store?- asked Michael. -Ohh she was getting hardware stuff...-Phil forgot to make up a reason for her to be in the hardware store and he had to think fast because the boys were staring at him still wondering.-with her [parents. She was buying hardware stuff with her parents. yeah. The boys stared at Phil with doubt but they bought it. -Well she is smoking, man. They went back to the girls. They all were talkign and laughing. Phil payed attention to Rachel but he was also patying atention to Keely's expresions to see if she was jealuos. -Ohh Phil lets go dancing again- Rachel took his hand and gently pulled him to the dance floor. Keely followed them with her eyes. She was trying to deny it but she couldn't lie to herself: she was jealous. While she was deep in thought Michael noticed it. -Hey lets dance too. -Ohh sure lets go.
Ok I'll write the rest another day because I'm tired and I want to watch potf , wich they are playing right now. Hope you enjoyed it.
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Post by adam on Oct 25, 2006 22:59:26 GMT -5
yeah I liked it but make sure next time you spelled everything right just a little advice ok well write soon you should like phil making out with Racheal or something and keely sees that would be good but its your story so you can do it your way.well G2G
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boricua4ever
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Post by boricua4ever on Oct 31, 2006 13:53:05 GMT -5
Ok I'll follow your advice and I'll be more carefull writing.
The music suddenly stoped and a slow melody started playing. "This is for all the couples out there." said the Dj. Rachel smiled at Phil and put her hand on Phil's shoulder, Phil took her right hand with his left hand and put his right hand on her waist, very gently. Keely, who was still staring at them with the corner of her eye, put her arms around Michael and he did the same. Michael noticed that Keely wasn't paying attention to him. -Amm... Hello, Keely. I'm right here. -I know. -Then what's wrong? I mean you keep staring at Phil and his date. -No... I'm...There's nothing wrong. I... I'm fine, I am, really. -No you're not. Keely you know I know you very well and I know something is wrong.- He let go and went to sit down. Keely following him. -Michael...-she sat on his side. -Look Keely is allright if you want to spend sometime with Phil. I just have to deal with that, I mean, he was your bestfriend and you haven't seen eachother for a long time. What makes me feel unconfortable is that you keep denying it and you don't tell me anything. -Well I didn't wanted to make you feel bad. Michael looked away and then stared at Keely again and took a deep breath. -Look, this is really weird and hard for me to say but...if you want to have a dance with Phil...go ahead. -Are you sure? He nodded. -O...K... While Michael and Keely were talking, Phil and Rachel were still dancing. Rachel was getting too excited with Phil. -You look so dreamy...-she said touching his neck very slowly. She was being very flirty.-Even Keely thinks you are great. Man all the girls here must be jealous of me because I am with the cutest boy of all.-she said still very flirty. -She does?!- said Phil who was lost in the part were Rachel mentioned Keely. -Yeah I was telling them how great you are and she kept stariing at you and all that. Phil smiled. -She must be jealous too.- said Rachel like people being jealous of her was something normal to her and something she enjoyed. Phil smiled again. -You think so? -Dah its kind of obvious, she can't take her eyes off you. Phil smiled happily but Rachel didn't. -She is the reason why I'm here, isn't she? Phil hesitated a little and then nodded. Rachel looked away sadly. -Well i guess this date isn't even real. -I told you at home...but if is of any help i chose you because, well, I saw you and I liked you. -Yes but you like her better. -Well I know her better.... A silence inveded the two of them and the,finally, Rachel smiled again. -You're a great guy, Phil, she is very lucky to have you...even as her best friend. The music ended and they went to sit down. A cool music was playing and Keely went towards Phil. -Hey, Do you want to dance? -Sure They went to the dancefloor. -What hapened to your boyfriend? -Ahh he got tired and...I missed the oldtimes. They danced in silence for a while then Phil said: -So...what do you think of Rachel so far? -She seems nice. -I like her too...of course not as much... -I'm thirsty. Can we get some punch?- Keely said interrupting phil and went to the drink table. Phil went after her. -So...changing the subject, what have hapened to you in this two years? -well, lets see...My mom got a boyfriend. -really? --Yeah almost a year ago. amm...what else...maybe you knew this already but mr. Hacket is now the oficial principal of our school...I don't remeber what else. A lot of things have hapened and I wont be able to tell you all tonight. -I know, don't worry. So do you want to dance again? -mmm...Ok. They danced to the ast song of the party. looking straight at eachother's eyes. Keely couldn't see clear, everything in her mind was shodowy. She wanted to be with him, she didn't wanted to be with him...she didn't knew anything. She was so confused but just when she felt she couldn't take it anylonger, that she was about to run away, she saw Phil's eyes and she felt safe.She felt alive with that warm stare, that stare she just couldn't get out of her mind no matter how much she wanted to or how hard she tried to get rid of it. The melody of the song wasn't of any help to controll all those mixed feelings. It was a slow tune, sweet and romantic. The song ended but they didn't noticed it. They kept staring at eachother in a silent embrace. Keely's boyfriend noticed it and wasn't very happy with it but he tried to have aptience. Keely and Phil finally got out of the trance they were into. Keely looked away and let go of Phil and he also let go. It was ackward for her and he knew it so he didn't protest, he didn't even made a coment.
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Post by boricua4ever on Dec 26, 2006 22:07:54 GMT -5
Wow! I have a lot to write since I haven't written here. Ok.
Next monday Pim woke up very happy. She went out of her room singing. -What are you so happy about? -jm...well let's just say I know something good is going to happen today- she said with a mischeavous sparkle in her eyes. She took a toast from the toaster and left, still singing.
She was talking with li'l Danny in front of her locker waiting for the fashion zombies to arrive. Finally Candida and the other grils entered the school with some fosforecent shirts in all sorts of colors with big flowers stuck all around them. Pim couldn't help it and burst out laughing when Candida passed by. -What are you laughing about? This is the style that's in. Ohh wait, what could we expect from the poor fashion clueless Pimple. -You know you look really good Candida- pim said in a tone of sarcasm- I really wish I could be less "fashion clueless" like you said and be more like you. Candida walked away and Pim laughed hapily. -This is great! They do everything I tell them to do! Is a dream come true, a dream come true I tell ya- she said wlaking to class and Phil passed by and wondered why was she so happy. -Hey keel! -ohh hi Phil! Are you ready for the test today? -Preety much, yeah. They walked towards Messershmitt's classroom. -SO where's you boyfriend? -Michael, he didn't came to school today, he wasn't feeling so good. -Ohh..-Phil preetended to be very sad for him- But on the bright side he doesn't have to take the test and we can spend time toguether..like the old times. Keely just smiled and they walked to class. For now, Phil had decided to try his best not to think of Keely as more that a friend and to just relax and be happy. After all he got to be with her again, not exacly like he wanted but he knew he should enjoy that valuable time with his best friend. In lunch they were eating toguether. -I wonder what this is supposed to be....sausage...beef...or plastic...you never know with this foods- said Phil staring a t a disgusting brown piece of...something and they both laughed. -We should really eat from somewhere else. I mean, look at this food Phil, this canot be haelthy.- they laughed again and then there was a silence but it wasn't a cold silence, it was a thoughtfull silence, a phylosophical silence. One of those you know the other person is thinking about something good, one of those you don't feel lost or unconfortable, you just feel like it happened on the right moment because you start thinking too, colecting memories from your head. -You know, I know I just got in the time machine and time traveled and that we are here because of an accident but... i feel like i was in an urge for having moments like this with you. I know is not exacly the same than beign two years waiting but... i feel like I missed it a lot I feel like I've been needing this for a long tiem and now that we were able to laugh toguether again and well it feels good, I feel such a relief. Keely smiled. -Don't you? hah? -Don't you feel happy as well? -Yeah, of course. It's great having you back. -And it's great being back. After school they both walked toguether to their homes. They joked a lot on the way and remembered lots of things they lived before Phil had to leave the century but non of them dared to touch the couple subject. -Hey you do remember you told me to take a reincheck on the skyack ride? -ohh yeah! -Well how about if we go skyacking tonight? -jm...let me think..uhh dah!- Keely also forgot all about how weird she used to feel around Phil the first days he was back and Phil also forgot about making Keey jealous or about trying to get back with her. They both just wanted to be best friends. Pim was home already when Phil got there. -la la la la...today is a happy day!- she was still singing. -Ok Pim what are you so happy about?-asked Barbara- You are never like this. -WHat's wrong with being happy, mom? -Maybe the fact that when you are singin like that you either sick or working on one of your evil plans to "rule the world" -Come on! Can't a girl be happy without feeling blamd for something that isn't wrong- Pim left and went to her room- and there's nothing wrong with trying to help that fashion zombies be a little more "fashion forward" ja ja ja. muajajaja She took the wizard and turned it on with a mischeacous look in her eyes. That night Keely got to Phil's house. -Hey Keely, nice haviong you around. -Thanks mrs. Diffy. -SO are you ready?- said Phil exited -Yes- they went outside- so where are you taking me? -Um its a surprise. They hopped on the skyack and left the house leaving a big blow of wind behind. They were flying and after a while they saw some fireworks. It was so romantic and trhey couldn't help to think of when they were a couple. -This is so beutiful!- said Keely. -It is- Phil was staring at her and she got nervious. -Look at that one!- she shouted so Phil will look away. They stayed quiet for a minute then Phil looked at her and she looked at him. There was nothing to say 'cause their eyes were the ones doing the talking. They didn't ha to hear eachother's words because they knew how they felt, even tho' they tried to deny it, it was obvious they felt like it was the perfect moment for a kiss and it wouldn't had been very hard because they were so close without noticing but right when they were sure they couldn't hold themselves down anymore Keely's cellphone started ringing. I'll write soon 'cause I've writen a lot in my note book and not much in here so I'll come back as soon as I can to write the rest.Hope you liked it!
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Post by linda06 on Jan 17, 2007 14:40:58 GMT -5
grrrrrr,darn cellphone,she should huv flung it over the side Lukin forward to the next part,hopefully we won't huv tae wait as long
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Post by boricua4ever on Feb 6, 2007 14:42:57 GMT -5
Ohh I'm sorry I've been gone for so long and I hate to tell you this but I'm not going to be here as often as I used to 'cause I'm graduating this may, yes, I'm a senior!!!! and well you know I have to study and all but I'll try to write as soon as I can so I don't leave you waiting for too long. I'll check if later today I come back and write, if not, I hope this week I don't get too much homework so I can write. Take care!
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boricua4ever
Berwick's Angel
"I'm walking on sunshine, Ohh Ohh."
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Post by boricua4ever on Feb 8, 2007 20:28:00 GMT -5
Yey! I'm back
They both looked the other way instantly as if the person who was calling could see them through the cellphone. Keely answered: -Ohh Hey. How are you?.....You're feeeling better....That's great....ja ja ja.....So I guess I'll see you tomorow...huh...no I'm not home...Where am I? ahh well I am...I am with Phil...Phil, my friend, yes....ohh Michael...are you there?....Michael I can't understand you...are you still there....It must be the signal.I call you later,ok, bye- she hung up abruptly and fast. -Michael, huh? -Yeah -He seems to always appear on the worst moment to appear.-Phil thought aloud. -Why do you say that? -ammm......did I said that aloud....it was suposed to be an inner thought. -jm, Phil I'm getting tired. Can we go back home? -Fine- Phil tried to be comprehensive and turned to the way home. Keely was so tired that she fell asleep.
Ok that's all for today. I'll be back as soon as I can.
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Post by linda06 on Feb 9, 2007 10:48:08 GMT -5
ooh short and sweet....Ok come back whenever you can
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boricua4ever
Berwick's Angel
"I'm walking on sunshine, Ohh Ohh."
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Post by boricua4ever on Feb 14, 2007 15:42:25 GMT -5
Ok let's see if I can write more than I did the last time, lol.
Keely was so tired she fell asleep on Phil's shoulder but he didn't knew she was asleep. -I'm sorry to bring this up but what I said about Michael I said it because...lets be honest I'm jealous, very jealous and he always calls you or appears out of nowhere when we are having a great time together, when I know you are about to forget him and... Keel? Are you listening?- she didn't answered and he figured she was asleep and smiled sadly. -Yeah...we lost the moment...once again. When they got home Phil woke Keely. -Hey Keel we're back home. Wake up. Phil walked her home. -Well, here is where I go.Thanks Phil. -For what? -For tonight...I really missed it. I...I really missed you. -Me too. Keely opened her armas and hugged Phil. They felt so good, so close. Michael was on his way to see if Keely was already home with the excuse he was going to check that day's material. -Good night Philly Willy. -Ohh no, you know I hate it when you call me like that. -Why Philly Willy? -Don't you ever call me Philly Willy again. -Allright...-she turned around and said with a low voice-Philly Willy.
-So where were you with Phil last night? -Ohh I as at his home. We just wanted to catch up, you know, so he invited me to dinner. -Preety smart guy he is.-Michael said with a tone -What? -Keely that Phil guy totally has a crush on you. Keely was a little shocked and answered: -Why do you say that? -DO you think I'm blind, Keely? -No but... -The question here is: Did you two had something going on before I met you? -Michael stop it! What's wrong can't you see me hanging out with a friend without getting jealous? -Not with him because I'm positive about this. He likes you. Keeely turned her back and went to class and he did the same.
In class Keely and Phil were asigned to make a projecdt toguether so that day after lunch they decided to stay in the library to start doing their work.
On Phil's house Pim was sitting on the kitchen. -I don't know what is hapening... People are not making fun of the stupid fashion zombies...What can I do?- she thought for a moment- I think is time to go to the next level of ridiculous style. I swear i wont rest until I make them miserable! She took a magazine and stared at it to get some ideas. The next day the fashion zombies arrived to school looking strange, more than the day before but no one seemed to notice it. -Can you believe this! No one is making fun of them! - Yeah. Some are even copying their style, look. -What?!- some girls walked by wearing flowers everywhere in all sorts of colors ans sizes, they looked like clowns with all those colors but no one cared, no one said anything when they walked throungh the hallway. Phil saw the girls but kept walking with Keely then Candida stoped in front of them. -Hi Keely. -Ohh Hi Candida...What's up with all the colors and flowers- said Keely staring at the strange outfit of Candidda. -Haven't you heard. This is the latest trend. I read it on this Magazine. Phil knew that magazine, it was thwe one Pim had the other day. -Let me see thatt_he said taking the magazine while the girls left. -Ughh How could a magazine put such hidious clothe as the lates trend. -jm..I have a feeling Pim has something to sdo with it. Pim was walking with Li'l Danny -This is unbelievable, people in this school are more controled by the so called popular kids than I thought. Those fadshion zombies have got to more minds than I'd thought. -Guess it's over, huh? - Over! Are you nuts? Pim DIffy doesn't back down so easily! As Always Debbie popped up out of nowhere. -That's the attitude Pimsy, you know, grandma always says to never give up...-she got interrupted by Pim -Yeah Yeah...'cause the world is a beutiful place to live and everything is rosy. blah blah blah... -O MY God! have you seen Candidda's outfit. I'll have to say, its a little weird but I love it, tomorow I'll dress like them. -You tooo! -Yeah Ithink the way they dress is super coool plus I love flowers! -You love everything. -I love to love! yey! -Yey-said Pim careless. OK I'm tired, my right shoulder hurts so that's all for today. Enjoy!
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Post by linda06 on Feb 15, 2007 14:48:02 GMT -5
Cool.cool.....Just ditch Michael....you know you want to You know you want Phil not many PHEELY moments in that part Hopefully the next part will huv PHEELY ;D
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