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Post by Femtimon on Jan 20, 2006 17:25:50 GMT -5
Drop of water By: Brittney Shanholtzer I'm a drop of water going down to a stream that leads to waterfall. I feel like I am on a roller coaster that is going very fast until I get closer to the waterfall and then I felt sick and scared because I'm going to fall. The waterfall is 12ft high. I have never been that high before. When I fall from the waterfall. I feel like something is going to happen this actually.
Actually the drop of water represents me. The stream represents a path I'm following that I have to stay on if I want a good life. The waterfall represents the ups and downs in my life but I keep them in control.
>So this is no billion dollar piece, but you gotta give her some slack (this was when she was in 8th grade)
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Post by ♥~Mel Diffy~♥ on Jan 20, 2006 22:26:01 GMT -5
Wow, pretty good for an 8th grader
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Post by sultanpeppershaker on Jan 22, 2006 2:09:46 GMT -5
For an eighthyear... not too shabby.
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Post by prince on Jan 24, 2006 21:55:44 GMT -5
Yer really good! Sounds like something Jon Foreman would write, lol
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