A song a Poem ... I don't relly know

[boricua4ever]

What Am I doing
thinking about you all day
what am I doing
Calling you names in my head
dreaming of what could be
making my fake reality
missing you when you're not aroung
staring at you
wondering if its true

we had ups and downs
and we are up again
I wonder if you feel the same
if you don't I don't know
i'll imagine that you do
you don't even konw what i think
you don't know how i feel
no one knows
when you hug me
when you tell me all those sweet things
when we look eachother in the eye
when we are together

what are we?
what do we feel
for real
don't know
I am dreaming this?
is this real?

we are nothing
you don't know how i feel
i don't know jhow you feel
no one knows
we are nothing
but i think we want to be more

sorry for the gramar horrors and all that but I I'm kinda in a rush. any suggestions?

[♥~Mel Diffy~♥]

That's really good! It could be both a song & a poem. It would only be a song, though, if it had music set to it.

[reesie24]

wow..i really like that! it would make a really awesome song...but it makes a cool poem too.

[boricua4ever]

thanks!!!! I'm so glad you like it.I'll check out if I can create something with my guitar. i have music for other songs but they are in spanish.